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Sleepless Love Dies Hard
Mistress of Sleep—
Only you, Can put me out of my misery, And I shall— Have all of eternity, Many sleepless nights Dreams— Awaken, Sounds— Murmur within unison, Nothing, In mind Because, I am, A memory, That no one remembers. Oh, Mistress, Of Sleep, Take me out of my misery— No more, Pain, And cries, That fills the night, With anguish— Passion, May rot the brain, Love, Is, A word, For lovers— Nothing, Can be said, In my part, My love, Which, I thought— Was true, May possibly be, Wondering— Could I be wrong? Oh, Mistress, I am calling, End—life— Loneliness, I had— An eternity of rest, Eyes are fluttering— Closing, Senses— Aware, “Rest,” I hear—calling— Falling, Into, Abyss— Eternity— No one cares, As I fall, No one, Comes— To my aide I am dead to the world— Mistress of Sleep, Take me, My time is now! |
An Old Love
You used to move me, every single time you came through the door
And I used to be Tight in my chest, It deepened every single time you came near. Nothing except bliss filled my heart Awakened my soul— “Friends” we were called, Until a night that changed all. Nothing made me happy, But to hear— To touch— Many thoughts passed through the mind, At this time But how to say them I can not know You were the acid that tore through me The lions den of shame I can not mourn if I can not breathe Leave leave leave me alone Get out of this place Reserved only for love I can not hate you if you stay Can you see me vexed in this shallow plane of existence Left alone cold without a home I knew you once for your shelter Your face gave me sun to see Your eyes were the sky Uncluttered by clouds of despair Your ears were my god Hearing every prayer What happened What did I do I am not soddom and Gomorrah I did not ignore your warnings Why do you persist with this fire Will you not leave me to move on My chance for love has arrived Do you aim to rob me of this hope Would this be your last hurrah Your encore I can not move on I am paralyzed And I think I could just let this love Pass right by me |
Okay, so I'm going to do a REAl crit here because I like a lot of your stuff written. Don't take my special attention the wrong way. ;)
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It's a good start, really it is. I hope this helped you! If you have any other questions please do message me. I'll be happy to answer. LNT |
Nikolas, I've merged your two Poetry threads together. Please remember that each user is only allowed to create one Poetry topic. :yes:
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