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neller 10-12-2009 03:12 PM

Only the Old Know
 
Only the Old Know

Deep in the forest,
Trembling and cold,
Sat two women,
One young and one old.

The young woman was,
Worried to her best,
About ravenous beasts,
While the old one rest.

"My dear old friend,
Do you not fear?
Many hungry predators,
Do lurk near."

"The beast do not,
seek out man on intent,
They only search for food,
No harm is meant."

"But we could be that food!
Don't you understand!
Those creatures are hungry,
I'm a defenseless human!"

They sat very quiet,
The young woman grew tense,
She finally lost control,
And ran without sense.

The old woman smiled,
Only because she knew,
That all the hungry beasts,
Like to chase after their food.

neller 10-16-2009 03:38 AM

This is my favorite poem written by me. Of course, I've written poems of better structure, but none have that ironic twist at the end that humors me.

amulet 10-20-2009 05:34 PM

i love this! :D makes me laugh. haha she will get eaten now xP lolz

JediGal 11-04-2009 04:23 AM

Hehe! xD Nice job neller!


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