Critics Please WIP
 

this is my first official drawing of using Easy paint tool Sai, I made a mistake of the wrong brush size for the hooves and the flame. Its Incomplete but any form of critiquing would be loved. And I never did fire before so this is also a first as well. I am so awesome:sarcasm: and the original sketch beneath was moved so easier to see the color part
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v6...shorseman2.jpg

Oh! I really like the motion and the emotion is put into the horse(?) monster. I like the face on it, it's very sinister. The only thing would be, the rump/end part of the horse, where you blurred it. It's too hard, like use a softer brush to ease in the blending affect. Then for the fire hooves, they seem too big, because the horse's front legs are too small and skinny. I think if you make the front legs muscular because that's what the whole horse gives off, this dark strong horse monster.

But the flames are really good, your blending on everything else is spectacular. You're good at portraying emotion in that piece. It's just that smudge on the rump and the horsie's legs.

Holy crap-ola... you did that with your computer? I have got to get with the times... I'm still using paint :sarcasm: But that's pretty awesome. I guess if you were looking for a little bit of critique then... maybe the legs could use some work? The flames on the feet look good, and it would look even better if the legs were more muscular. But ti's pretty schweet. That's a great job and your first time too! Awesome! Keep it up ;)