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Ryuusei 10-23-2009 02:42 PM

Just a short poem... What do you think?
 
To go back in time
Just for a day
I know exactly
What I would change
It might sound silly
But I don't care
My life is different
Without you there

Just something that sort of came to me. What do you think?

iinsanely Sane 10-23-2009 08:31 PM

Loved it, but you should continue it.. as you said, its a bit short to my liking.

JediGal 11-04-2009 04:26 AM

Ooohh I like it ^^...so far. I agree, please continue this if you like. Explain why your "life is different/Without you there." Our tell us what might change in your life, especially if it may "sound silly". Ya know? Keep it up! :3


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