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fairywaif 10-29-2009 07:42 PM

Writer's Paradise
 
With NaNoWriMo coming up, I thought you guys would appreciate a little support. Come hash out your ideas, or participate in writing contests! If you're not participating in NaNoWriMo (National Novel Writing Month) that's okay too. If you want us to critique your work, either make a thread and link to it or post it here. Preferrably, stories you post here are either a single chapter or a short story. Anything longer should have it's own thread.

Here's a link to NaNoWriMo: Link to website

Nonwriting chat is appreciated too!

fairywaif 10-29-2009 07:42 PM

Reserved for contests

fairywaif 10-29-2009 07:43 PM

Reserved for writing ideas (drabbles, plot twists etc.)

fairywaif 10-29-2009 07:43 PM

Reserved for links to stories' threads

Murasaki 10-29-2009 07:45 PM


Hello ! , yay First Post

fairywaif 10-29-2009 07:48 PM

Are you participating in NANOWRIMO or do you just like writing?

Murasaki 10-29-2009 07:51 PM

I just love writing , im currently working on a short writing piece . ; )

fairywaif 10-29-2009 07:55 PM

Cool. Most of my stories don't get finished, for various reasons. I'm hoping to get to 50000 words this time though. I think I have a really solid idea.

Murasaki 10-29-2009 07:56 PM

Oh , that sounds great . Wouls you like to read what I have so far. it's not much , just about 6 sentences .

fairywaif 10-29-2009 07:59 PM

Sure. The beginning is the most important part.

Murasaki 10-29-2009 08:04 PM

Code:

Why was I here? The wind made me shudder as it ripped across my back, mocking me. Why wouldn't my eyes open? I flinched lightly to the touch of a stranger I could not see nor hear...

Everything went blank.

My eyes fluttered open to the smell of broth, some sort of chicken broth. That's when I saw where I was, in a small cell it looked like. The floor was different shades of brown, definitely concrete, the walls were cinder blocks piled high to a ceiling to far above me in the darkness I could not see. With a single door no higher than 4 feet, and a small window blocked off with rusty red metal bars just visible in the moonlight that filtered in. My name... Come on, think what is my name... Ah, Clarice

My name , it was a gift . It was expensive , but not in cost . I gave my life , no , my soul for the name the divine and well known goddess of healing , Clarice . For whom had I taken this name , had given me everlasting faith and devotion for those to whom I pray. Yes , Clarice . To whom my divine spirit will be forfilling and will be praised deeply , changing the world to come and for those whom have already served under her controling wrath . Clarice . My name .


fairywaif 10-29-2009 08:07 PM

Really cool. I can't wait to read the rest of it! One small thing, could not see nor hear sounds a bit akward. I don't know if you wanted to change that or not.

Murasaki 10-29-2009 08:09 PM

Thanks . Well it's refering to the stranger . She could feel the touch but she could not see nor hear him .

fairywaif 10-29-2009 08:15 PM

I understood that, I just thought the combination of words didn't work perfectly. But that might be just me. I don't know. It's probably perfectly fine, to be honest.


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