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MiyokoShape 11-12-2009 11:00 PM

Poems From the Mind of I
 
I meant for the title to read that way.
I am big into poetry, I have an account on another site, which is dedicated to poetry. I have over 200 things I have written, although I do not like all of them. I will post some of them here, and any new ones I write up! Please leave me constructive criticisms. I would love to know how to improve. :D

Title: Forgotten
Written: February 21st, 2006

Forgotten
I always am
Never worth the thought
Never remembers, not once
It's how you broke my heart
Forgetting all about me
About us
I had always hoped
That you would be
the one that never
forgot about me
But one of these days
I hope you see
Our life together
Is no longer in my memory
I Hope to push it all away
It will always be better
If I am the one never
Remembered


Ps: I will point out, I write mainly in free verse. I will try to post when the poem was written along with the poem itself. Also, many of these poems are melancholy, I don't know why but I am best at writing sad things, but No worries, I am a happy person :D

Moonfall 11-12-2009 11:12 PM

I like it!
I love how you express so much feeling into every sentence.
Even the shorter ones hold so much power.
Very nice!

MiyokoShape 11-13-2009 04:53 AM

Another poem! :D

Title: Waiting
Written: September 14th, 2006

(I've Always Been)
Waiting
Maybe for a call
Maybe for a letter
Nothing ever comes

(Nothing But)
Waiting
To hear from you
To talk to you
But I never will

(Don't Keep Me)
Waiting
For something I want so much
Something I'll never get
You won't give it, Not to me

(I Can't Keep)
Waiting
For you to show up
Why didn't you love me?


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