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Poems From the Mind of I
I meant for the title to read that way.
I am big into poetry, I have an account on another site, which is dedicated to poetry. I have over 200 things I have written, although I do not like all of them. I will post some of them here, and any new ones I write up! Please leave me constructive criticisms. I would love to know how to improve. :D Title: Forgotten Written: February 21st, 2006 Forgotten I always am Never worth the thought Never remembers, not once It's how you broke my heart Forgetting all about me About us I had always hoped That you would be the one that never forgot about me But one of these days I hope you see Our life together Is no longer in my memory I Hope to push it all away It will always be better If I am the one never Remembered Ps: I will point out, I write mainly in free verse. I will try to post when the poem was written along with the poem itself. Also, many of these poems are melancholy, I don't know why but I am best at writing sad things, but No worries, I am a happy person :D |
I like it!
I love how you express so much feeling into every sentence. Even the shorter ones hold so much power. Very nice! |
Another poem! :D
Title: Waiting Written: September 14th, 2006 (I've Always Been) Waiting Maybe for a call Maybe for a letter Nothing ever comes (Nothing But) Waiting To hear from you To talk to you But I never will (Don't Keep Me) Waiting For something I want so much Something I'll never get You won't give it, Not to me (I Can't Keep) Waiting For you to show up Why didn't you love me? |
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