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Come one, come all
~*~Come one, come all~*~ Welcome to my poetry thread. I'll be posting here whenever I feel like writing something new. My first posts will be old poems I wrote. Most of my stuff is dark and depressing since I usually write when I feel like that but I do have the occasional happy poem. Somethings you need to remember to follow: ~ Menewsha General Rules ~ Poetry Subforum Rules Break one of these rules in my thread I will report you. I encourage critics as well as interpretations of what I write. I hope you enjoy! |
~*~My Poems~*~ Instead of putting a new post at the end of my thread I'll update this post as a list of my poems so other don't have to look through th thread for them. Yin Yang Yin Moon, Material forms Completing, Freezing, Darkening Submission, Female, Male, Dominance Creating, Heating, Lighting Sun, Heaven Yang Shadow Tears I try to cry I try and try The feelings are there But my eyes are bare I lost someone close to me I watched their soul go free As their life slipped by All of my tears were dry Through my fingers ran their blood I just sat their like a dud I crawled in a corner, eyes wide Waiting for tears like high tide Sitting in the corner, hidden by shadows Bathing in regrets and sorrows I sat there wanting to die For all that happened I could not cry My life went bleak A tear ran down my cheek As they sat so near They stole my tear They felt my pain As my tears fell like rain Surrounded by darkness I no longer saw the carcass They took me away On my lonely day Forgetting would leave me empty Remembering just cannot be They took my sorrows Those fiends, those shadows As I wandered their world Emotions no longer caroled Black water filled the abyss Rain drops gentle as a kiss Floating in the water until I drown Never hearing another sound At the bottom is where I now lie Waiting until it is my turn to die I'll Wait Forever I'll wait forever For someone that can follow me Someone who understands The only one who will know every bit and piece of me I'll wait forever For someone to see past this mask Someone who will catch me before I lose my grip The only one who won't run from any aspect I'll wait forever Beit this life time or the next Someone will find me Time doesn't exist, because I'll wait forever You Promised Me You promised you wouldn't leave me With me you'd always be But you couldn't foresee The accident to be That promise keeps me here As I wait for you dear You reached me with fear Yelling "Don't leave me please!" "I'm always with you gees." You kept your promise to me |
Reserved in case I need it for something
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I loved the diamante poem, Yami-chan! It was beautiful and captured an essence I had not thought of when i wrote mine a long time ago...
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diamante poem? I don't know types I just write how I feel like writing >.>
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These are very good. I believe poetry is all about expression and you've down just that. :D
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I like poetry, I believe everyone should write, even if they don't know much about poetry. Writing helps clear the mind.
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It really does! If I don't upstage you, could I upload my own poem, it's like a sorta happy poem :P
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