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Captain Pains 11-28-2009 09:24 PM

The Captain's Poetry
 
I write a lot of poetry in my spare time or when I'm really inspired.
My poems could be classified as dark, emo, gothic, suicidal but oh well.
I'm trying to push my boundaries and explore new area's, but its not looking to well right now...

But please, do comment on what you think. <3
I'll post a few:

[This was inspired by dictionary's word of the day. xD]
Sybarite

I see you.
Sipping your tea in the midnight garden,
reading your precious book of lies.

I see you.
Staring at that fellow Victorian lady,
lost in her dark amber eyes.

I see you.
Getting those thoughts in your head,
as dormant unknown feelings arise.

I see you.
Following that lady,
An act so unwise.

I see you.
Pushing yourself against her fragile body,
Stopping her from making those desperate cries.

I see you.
Leaving her weeping in her place,
with you a look of surprise.

I see you.
Cowering in fear before my hand,
My look of deepest despise.

I see you.
Your nothing but dirt to me now,
I hate you so much that you could just die.

I see you.
Underneath my feet,
finally getting my prize.

I see you.
Now I don't.


[One of those ex-boyfriend inspired poems...]
Change it

Look at yourself through the mirror.
Who do you see?
Not yourself, of course.
But the shell of the person you used to be.
Don't blame me for your mistakes.
I was not in your life long enough to do anything.
You did this to yourself,
Putting your heart at stake,
For a dream that will never come true.

I wanted to stop you,
but my un-dying love clouded my judgement.
Trying to help you get what you wanted.
Not seeing what you were turning into.
Now your future relies on someone,
Who doesn't know how to handle you.
To strong for her to control,
Getting help from no one.

Change your habits before its to late,
Because I'm no longer here to hold you hand.
And guide you through the darkness.
To what would of been your fate.
As I say my last words to you,
You must never release the love you have for the world.
For it will be useful in the future,
No matter what you turn into.


Beating Heart.

I was promised everything my heart desires,
Only to find that I was lied to.
No longer able to trust anyone,
Not trusting because of you.
Everything you ever said to me,
Was just an act to get me into your bed.
You blinded me with words so I couldn’t see,
That in the end, I’ll wind up dead.
If you were going to leave me,
To break my heart again,
At least set me free,
And make my heart stop beating before your leave.

I loved you more then life itself,
But that wasn’t enough to tame your tongue,
To bind your soul to your bones,
All the words now un-sung,
What were you thinking when you broke my heart?
I couldn’t believe what you did to me,
I should of seen it from the start.
Now you’ll wish you never met me,
Or left my heart still beating on this Earth.

The obsession with death,
Is nothing more then a dream to me.
Wanting to escape from my breath,
Trying to tighten this laced up Corset.
My actions are a failure in my mind,
It’s the truth in you that I want to find.
If you were going to leave me,
To Break my heart again,
At least set me free,
And make my heart stop beating before your leave.


Tell me what you think!
I'll post more later on~

ThyFaerieQueen 01-17-2010 07:30 AM

Ello Captain!

I really like your poetry, it makes me feel. I love Beating Heart Though.


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