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A couple of My Works
Here are some of my past Poetry Pieces:
(Written about mourning and remembering my childhood) "Losing My Child" I love you even in death my sweetpea, princess, critter, my little naturalist forever. And what is it to love a daughter forever gone, your smile everlasting like your wind whipped hair, never losing shape and your eyes, oh so distant and grey, seeing things, that mine never will. To lose you instantly like the brilliant flowers of may. Fading in a moment, eternally away. My baby girl, I watch over you the way you watched that dying bird. Do you remember that rainy day when you found her broken body? and held her till she died? Do you remember when you buried her in the open meadow? And I held you while you cried? Today it is raining, as I make a place for you to rest, and I hold your broken body in the open meadow. What is it like? My baby girl to be buried beneath such a field of beauty, next to, the humble grave of a bird you once loved. ------ "Dark Love" (Written about a relationship I watched that had to fight against Bipolar disorder: Not my own relationship) Love like a rose does not exist with you with me with me everything is just a little harder more difficult more complex because the part of me that loves you is the part of me that falls apart on empty days when sky's are grey and the world seems just a little darker darker love is that what we called it? when I fall apart and hurt myself and hurt you while you protect me from my own nails Is that what we call it when you force my gripping fingers apart and remove them from my hair Dark love is that what we call it when you hug me just to keep my flailing arms away from my blood and bruise stained face Im not a bucket of rose petals clear of thorns maybe you are trying to remove them Maybe our love is found in your efforts to hold me down through the storm and carry me through recovery Dark Love,.. is that what they call it? you don't seem so dark to me, as you cradle and rock me to sweeter sleep. ------- (Just for fun =) ) "Do Not Fear" A beacon of light That is what you are Even in a fog I can see you from a far A dark angel is watching you I reach out for your hand If you grasp mine lightly You will understand Even an angel of death Has a heart painted red And the stone underneath Has a beat, and has bled My beacon of light My white rose alive I watch you from a far I await your last cry Can you love death As you loved life Can you wed the dark As your glistening wife Love me like you love life Don’t hate me for watching you I don’t mean to pry I am awaiting your soul to make anew Take my hand lightly And you will understand This moment I take you Is your glass’s last sand Follow me closely As I draw you near Up to the light Let go of your fear ------ Feel free to comment about anything, but know that I find critique about the subject I am writing about useless. They maybe over done, but they are what I choose to write about. The more specific the critique the better. |
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