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A Silent Prayer
dear God
help this lost soul dont let me cry endless tears i dont want this pain i dont want these tears i want to feel loved by you if by no one else please...keep me close to you do not abandon me im scared...and lost i do not know what to do anymore please...do not abandon me |
Pretty good, just have to be more creative... like using more beautiful words or something else to make your poem convey your feelings to the readers more, and not just your thoughts...
I hope this helps... |
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