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Kris 12-30-2009 07:20 AM

Haikus
 
Share with me haiku now
one made of lovely words, dear
make it last all day

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Get out of my house!
What? You say this is YOUR house
And I should get out?

at_least_fer_now 12-30-2009 07:44 AM

uhm. poetry........

5,7,5, right?

ahem:

i don't have on pants
why should i bother with those?
i have my manties

Vanidar 12-30-2009 08:04 AM

A winter days dream
A life filled with happiness
Why must I awake?

pinkii 12-30-2009 10:35 AM

Love is bitter sweet
Unless you have met that one
Whom makes your heart sing <3

Sizzla 12-30-2009 03:18 PM

I'll be moving this thread on over to the poetry subforum in Lit Spot where it belongs. :yes:

mwahhaha 12-31-2009 12:13 AM

ice cream is the best
but it makes a crazy mess
time to have some pie.

by me!

Aw, I like it. <3 no stealing, please (not that I think any of you'd steal it. it's solely precautionary)

Bunai 12-31-2009 02:23 AM

You guys are writing Senryu.... except for "Vanidar" of course ^_^
Haiku is about seasons.

ANYWAY,


animal crackers
they're a very good snack
but don't eat too much

mwahhaha 12-31-2009 03:14 AM

Bunai knows her stuff. okay, then here's a real haiku.

springtime is not fun.
bugs are all over the place.
time to buy bug spray.

Vanidar 12-31-2009 04:14 AM

Actually, Haiku can be about things other than the seasons. It's nature in general. Here's another

Snow blankets the ground
In deathly quiet, the earth sleeps
In spring she'll awake

Or even:

Rain falls down in sheets
Tree roots soak up the wetness
New life will soon show

Bunai 12-31-2009 07:41 AM

Yeh, I did a catch all thing there. ^_^;;
I am better at senryu than haiku... I guess I need humor.

Lets see. hmm
Since the Alien movie is on

"Facehugger clings tight
A deep kiss is happening
Careful of acid."


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