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strange_dreams_512 03-03-2010 04:20 AM

lol we were both like >u< umph!! lol.. but it was fun : D and you know it hehehe xD

The Wandering Poet 03-03-2010 04:20 AM

Yeah... good memories... I wonder if I've had people thinking I was a new user XD cause my username changed

BloodyLuciel 03-03-2010 06:24 AM

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Originally Posted by The Wandering Poet (Post 1766702014)
*reads title* Ooh... I remember that XD I saw that video a few years ago I think!

@ Luciel - Oooh... okay... =) well... each person's life experiences are different... so no poem is read the same way worldwide... =) but your descriptions are very good as well =3
I think that freedom is unobtainable... because as humans we are corrupt and will always desire more

yup! that's so true! Whenever i make a poem and let my friends read i always ask them what they think the poem is all about. I love hearing their different opinions about it. It just goes to show that people really are different to one another yet sometimes they are exactly the same.

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Originally Posted by strange_dreams_512 (Post 1766705810)
God I know that well =_= 290 days left!! : O *wrote a paper of every day* >> <<

if you mind me asking,but what do you mean you know it well? can you please explain to me?

strange_dreams_512 03-03-2010 06:30 AM

Luc- oh well there's just been issues at home for forever that.. I have experienced repeated abuse throughout my life and with being different than the rest of my family members it's been hard to find many people who understand me.. people I can look to for comfort. So living here has been very difficult, especially with the many fights.. and I am either heavily criticized or considered invisible for my entire existence here. The time that I am counting down is the time until I am eighteen and free to leave. There has been tons of drama like being homeless and people getting into drugs and going in psych units and everything.. court orders and visits to the police station; I just want it all to end so I can live safe and happily.

The Wandering Poet 03-03-2010 07:03 AM

@ Luc - ^^ tis the beauty of poetry... a poem is a thousand stories in one

BloodyLuciel 03-03-2010 07:54 AM

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Originally Posted by strange_dreams_512 (Post 1766706727)
Luc- oh well there's just been issues at home for forever that.. I have experienced repeated abuse throughout my life and with being different than the rest of my family members it's been hard to find many people who understand me.. people I can look to for comfort. So living here has been very difficult, especially with the many fights.. and I am either heavily criticized or considered invisible for my entire existence here. The time that I am counting down is the time until I am eighteen and free to leave. There has been tons of drama like being homeless and people getting into drugs and going in psych units and everything.. court orders and visits to the police station; I just want it all to end so I can live safe and happily.


ah.. i see, wow, you really know what that poem feels like...

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Originally Posted by The Wandering Poet (Post 1766706863)
@ Luc - ^^ tis the beauty of poetry... a poem is a thousand stories in one

so true! ^_^

The Wandering Poet 03-03-2010 11:12 AM

Millions of words
Spoken in the same way twice
Mean different things

I'm writing this poem
Just because I said I am
Ended up to short

Acobjum 03-03-2010 08:10 PM

Inzei d'angwajlei ejei inventedel,
ejei oempei ompozqel alxes raitel utel.

What do y'all think so far?

Jethren 03-03-2010 08:36 PM

Soulmate - By Me (Also Going on my Deviantart)

There's far too few words I can say,
That tell you how I truly feel.
Even if it's not meant to be,
I can't help but wish that this was real.

I never knew why I was searching,
Losing myself to hide away.
Now I know that you hold inside,
A part of me,
That I need to save.

Acobjum 03-04-2010 03:43 AM

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Originally Posted by Jethren (Post 1766709414)
Soulmate - By Me (Also Going on my Deviantart)

There's far too few words I can say,
That tell you how I truly feel.
Even if it's not meant to be,
I can't help but wish that this was real.

I never knew why I was searching,
Losing myself to hide away.
Now I know that you hold inside,
A part of me,
That I need to save.

Excellent poem! Too bad it wasn't around when there was a poem contest during the Valentine event.

Jethren 03-04-2010 03:51 AM

Oh...um...thank you Acobjum. I write a lot of poetry, but to tell the truth I don't really think very highly of what I come up with. It's kind of embarrassing, but sometimes I submit to those online free poetry contests where they try to get you to buy a book with your poem stuck in it, just so they'll send me one of those "yeah right" editor's choice awards...you know, for a confidence boost.

The Wandering Poet 03-04-2010 05:53 AM

@ Acob - Those lines came out in another language... o.o what's it mean?

@ Jethren - As do we all look down upon our own creations, which will cause us to make a better poem tomorrow =)

:lol: Hopefully someday I want to publish a book full of my own poems ^^
So hard to get satisfied with a poem though...

BloodyLuciel 03-04-2010 06:33 AM

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Originally Posted by Jethren (Post 1766709414)
Soulmate - By Me (Also Going on my Deviantart)

There's far too few words I can say,
That tell you how I truly feel.
Even if it's not meant to be,
I can't help but wish that this was real.

I never knew why I was searching,
Losing myself to hide away.
Now I know that you hold inside,
A part of me,
That I need to save.

wow, this is a really good poem! no absolute ....wow! ^_^

Acobjum 03-04-2010 06:37 AM

Inzei d'angwajlei ejei inventedel,
ejei oempei ompozqel alxes raitel utel.

In the language I invented,
I shall try to compose poem.

Spent most of my day reading Maria-sama something miteru.

The Wandering Poet 03-04-2010 06:45 AM

Hmm... interesting... a poem made up in your own language? o.o

@ Jethren - Seems another way to confident boost in to post here:lol:

Acobjum 03-04-2010 06:59 AM

D'enimi einjezqei
Ejei no eingwajlei
ongel rudel azhax.

The many changes
my language
has gone through.

The Wandering Poet 03-04-2010 07:01 AM

Hmm... as it's a foreign language (technically) I think it's supposed to be in quotes though, just so you know... though idk where made up languages would fall in that...

Acobjum 03-04-2010 07:02 AM

How has your day been by the way?

The Wandering Poet 03-04-2010 07:07 AM

Good... :lol: confusing people with the new username is fun XD

Acobjum 03-04-2010 07:13 AM

Today I've been to the grocery store.
Earlier mom made delicious mexican food galore.
Many in the world fuss,
yet I just read Mary Watches Over Us. (the manga I told you a few posts prior.)

The Wandering Poet 03-04-2010 07:26 AM

Many people fuss indeed
For they can not be happy
It is not impossible
But there is no stopping some
Whose minds are full of failure
And do not try to succeed

Acobjum 03-04-2010 07:28 AM

I'm heading to bed.
I hope you all shall sleep well
I say goodnight now.

The Wandering Poet 03-04-2010 07:30 AM

Have fun with sleeping
I know that it will be fun
I always love sleep

Jethren 03-04-2010 09:06 AM

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Originally Posted by The Wandering Poet (Post 1766715231)
@ Jethren - Seems another way to confident boost in to post here:lol:


Indeed, so it seems. I know I shouldn't be surprised, since poetry extra credit is how I passed English class, but the positive reactions I get to what are essentially the poetic equivalent of doodles in the margins for me never ceases to amaze me. Not that praise has ever been enough to make me feel better about what I create. (I meant to post this earlier, but Mene wouldn't let me.)



The time for speeches is at an end,
And the time for dreams begins again.
But out of dreams are poets born,
Such as thee, who I would call "Friend".
And so...'till heavens fired shall morning light,
(For I know that I shall see you then)
I shall return here in the morn'
But for now I say "Good night".

The Wandering Poet 03-04-2010 09:16 PM

All great things must start as nothing =)

=) quite good... and if it was meant to be posted last night... would have been very fitting ^^


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