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fuyumi_saito 04-06-2010 12:13 AM

I think it's rude to honk at poor pedestrians! It's scares us! lol.. Oh speaking of scary, I just found out that Ruki has a foot fetish! Why feet? *doesn't understand* second person I know of that has a foot fetish *just doesn't get it*

strange_dreams_512 04-06-2010 12:47 AM

Lol idk XD kinda funny huh hahaha.
Well yeah it is to catch attention o-o;;

fuyumi_saito 04-06-2010 12:50 AM

lol I suppose. *blinks* I don't normally wear mascara but I got this really good brand of mascara. It's not hard, my lashes are still soft, and it's green and black! It's cool. well it's for people with green eyes but yeah XD wonder if they have blue and black for people with blue eyes. Oh and green lashes looks cool too!

strange_dreams_512 04-06-2010 01:07 AM

Ah yeah well I had blue mascara and also purple but I gave it away because I don't like how it feels.

fuyumi_saito 04-06-2010 01:09 AM

oh *blinks* I don't like heavy mascara. Or hard mascara. Which is pretty much most mascara I've had. *wants to see what blue mascara looks like*

Nicole Legion 04-06-2010 01:09 AM

*walks in and looks around* Hello....

and goodbye I will be back

strange_dreams_512 04-06-2010 01:16 AM

Yeah lol I gave it to my friend who is into that stuff because I rarely ever use make up. I hate how it feels for one.. If I use it I want it to be light, natural, and effective.

fuyumi_saito 04-06-2010 01:19 AM

@Nicole
hi~! lol see you later

@Strange
yeah, I don't like heavy make up either. My little brother says I don't even have make up on. Even when I do. Then my little sister wears like smokey eye shadow(really cute), so he picks on her. but..idk. I mean I can hardly tell I'm wearing make up. Though I do know that kaze says he dislikes how make up looks on girls. *blinks*

strange_dreams_512 04-06-2010 01:30 AM

yeahhh if I wear any at all it's just a little bit of eyeliner to make it stand out a bit more and sometimes i make it look like there are a few extra lashes hahaha : p but nothing much. Actually anything else is rare for me to use xD Chapstick dries my lips out ^^" so I just drink water or lick them instead lol. Uhhh yeah. Not much in the routine. In fact I probably spend 1/30 of the time my sister does on appearance : o She like backcombs or straightens or curls her hair and puts it up all nice and puts mousse in after using a hair dryer and washing it and everything. Then there's all of this makeup and a lot of details about clothing and nails. I do that sometimes but not nearly as much as her by a long shot. o_o;;

fuyumi_saito 04-06-2010 01:48 AM

eh.. how do you make it look like you have more eyelashes? do you like do those fancy little strokes on the end of your eye with the eyeliner? Wow, I never heard of chapstick doing that. They helped my lips cause my lips used to be very dry. Like so dry I looked like I had a split lip XD there was always blood on my teeth from them being dry. I know vaseline works really really well! I just started using that and it's better than the chap stick ^^. You can even make your own lip gloss with vaseline. So it'd keep them moist and slightly colored.. My skin is really pale, so I can't really wear many shades of lip gloss without looking like a clown.

Hm.. I normally spend about a half hour doing everything. Mainly because of my hair. If my hair was straight I would probably take like only five minutes. It's good to be low maintenance though. So do you have your lap top yet or are you just randomly on the computer?

Nicole Legion 04-06-2010 02:09 AM

okay hello again.

strange_dreams_512 04-06-2010 02:26 AM

Nicole- Hello.
Fuyu- Oh, I'm on a desktop computer. Apparently my laptop is coming all the way from China so it won't be here until Thursday or so. That should be alright though as long as I don't drive myself crazy looking at the door despite that. xB
Yeah I kinda do a few lines at the end (: it's best if you sharpen it first. I have made really long ones before but I don't do that as much anymore and make it look more natural. Sometimes I also use a silver one under my eyes so it makes them look slightly bigger and brighter but really all I ever do is wash my hair, condition it, maybe towel dry it after I uhhh what's it called XD I uhhhh pull the water out of hahah. But besides that the most I do is deodorant, teeth, clothes and maaaaaybbbbeee eyes if I'm in mood. : p Yay for straight hair hahah.

Nicole Legion 04-06-2010 02:32 AM

So how are ya'll?

strange_dreams_512 04-06-2010 02:34 AM

Good, uhm, gonna make a phone call. I hope you are good too. xD

fuyumi_saito 04-06-2010 02:36 AM

@Nicole
Hey, I'm alright. Just getting ready to take a shower, you?

@Strange
Ah, I see. It's good you are able to use the computer though. Did you figure out all those math problems you were unsure of?

I don't have an eyeliner sharpener >_< I can figure something out though I suppose *nods* Silver eyeliner is pretty O_O.. I know of a lot of Japanese stars that use white eyeliner. It makes them look like they're natural, and yet.. um..well you really can hardly tell they're wearing make up but they pull it off really well I think. I think its just so cool how they use such a small detail like that to make a big difference.

strange_dreams_512 04-06-2010 02:39 AM

Yeah I actually got it from as Asian website XD I wonder if a normal sharpener would work...

Nicole Legion 04-06-2010 02:40 AM

Pretty good reading fanfiction, right now. I may have to post some poems in here eventually.

fuyumi_saito 04-06-2010 03:06 AM

@Strange
maybe. *has no clue* I don't use the normal pencil thing though. Perhaps just scissors making a sharp edge will work fine *nods* I'm a bit too afraid to use liquid eyeliner(not just that but it's like uber expensive)

Oh I was thinking that perhaps, it would be good idea to translate my poetry into Japanese. Mainly for practice. I think it will be difficult to do but umm..when I'm done with doing as much as I can, um could you help me with it?

@Nicole
ah, cool. I honestly don't remember the last time I read fanfiction. I can say with certainty that it was a naruto one though XD
Yeah you totally should post your poems.

Nicole Legion 04-06-2010 03:08 AM

@Fuyum: right now I'm reading Alice in Wonderland fanfics. *goes to look at her poems to decide which one to post*

fuyumi_saito 04-06-2010 03:09 AM

Wow, I didn't even know those existed to be honest. Though it does make sense that it would *nods*

Nicole Legion 04-06-2010 03:13 AM

They do and they are very fun! Alice and Hatter is one of my absolute favorite pairings right now.

Here we go, constructive criticism is more than welcome

Holocaust Nightmares


Those silenced long ago,
Their voices never heard
And their stories never told.
Those who died alone,
Their faith destroyed
And their families gone.
Those who didn’t live,
Who didn’t make it out,
Will never be forgotten.
For those whose voices tell
Of horrors long past
Remember them that died.
For those whose voices tell
Of Holocaust Nightmares
Won’t let their memories die.
And in this age,
64 years removed,
We listen and we learn
And we take to heart
Their words and memories.
We let them ring within us
And we, the future,
Won’t let Holocaust Nightmares
Be lost. We
Shall continue to keep
Their memory alive.

fuyumi_saito 04-06-2010 03:23 AM

Ah, yes I think that pairing has been more noticed due to the new movie~

Hmm.. I don't like the word destroyed you used to describe faith. I think a better word could be used. perhaps ruined would be good with an added word or too. gone also seems a bit too common. I think overall you could make it be a bit more emotional/descriptive. It's a really good poem though. ^^

Nicole Legion 04-06-2010 03:30 AM

you know I think I may come to like this thread a lot... most people always just tell me my poems are 'good' and they can't find fault with it... never helps me grow as a writer... *looks at the poem* let's see what I can do.

The Wandering Poet 04-06-2010 03:41 AM

Ah... when they say they can't find a fault, they mean more "I like it but I wont critique it because I don't want to be mean" is usually what I got... or "I don't know I'm not a poet" =.=

I like harsh (but useful) advice but I rarely get it...

What kind of advice do you like best?

fuyumi_saito 04-06-2010 03:42 AM

@Nicole
Welll XD I understand the feeling as well

@Kazer
wow way to show up randomly XD

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