XD ridiculously sappy? =3 Sappy can be good
sweet dreams fuyumi my friend ^^

@ strange - xP you and your love of vampires ~_^

@ Ni - Yeah... I have some lines in a lot of my poems that drive me nuts... I'm writing a very large poem right now that @[email protected] I can't seem to start as I plan to publish it so I want it to be perfect...

I think she meant another poem ^^

okay well here is my rhyming poem.... it's rough... (as in i just realized it has no punctuation...)

How surely the pure will fall
floating so high above us all
there place is great
ours so small

They hold gold within their hearts
when world doesn't even know where to start
and all we hold is hate
yet there love is art

Everyone starts without a taint
but then the heart is faint
and all consuming darkness grows
then the soul is staint

Only the mighty can rise above
and take the path of the dove
while we the mere sparrows
won't share our love

But even for them the call is strong
no pure soul can last for long
in a world so dark
in a world so wrong

Society cannot fully resist
as it fights for the right to exist
Those that looked back from Noah's ark
feel victim to this dark cist

They could not resist evil's call
they ran up against the wall
we could not fight that black mark
so surely the pure do fall.

I like how you rhyme on all but 1 line in each set of 4 =3

Punctuation isn't always required for a poem, as it takes time for a reader to return to the beginning, thus without punctuation you allow the reader to set a pace they like ^^

That reminds me of Kingdom hearts. : 3 yayy

lol actually if you pay attention the third lines rhyme with the third line in the next stanza!

O.o, looks at poem again to find Kingdom Hearts in it, I love that game!

*looks back* ohhh you're right!! Hey we pointed out something to each other xD;;

lol! Yeah I can see the Kingdom Hearts stuff, kinda cool never saw it that way before. It feeds my inner fangirl XD

Oooh they do... love it =D

Thankies!

The beauty of poetry is that many things can occur in a poem that you will only notice after many reads =3 making it a whole new poem

Words falling down fast
Watch closely for the pieces
To catch pure silver

most definitely!

Simple and pretty
A poem is a string of words
Written from the soul
^_^

Nodding heads smile
Curious to taste the truth
Aligned crayon box

*feels daunted* I can't write haikus!

First 5 syllables
Next line you write 7 more
And then back to 5

That was quite clever
What you did in that post there
About the haiku

XD

A battle rages across worlds
Soldiers fall for their lord's defense
Ships blast off towards the battlefield
Reinforcements on their way
To protect the world they love so much
The people they hold so very dear
Each holding back their secret weapon
The first a cannon for planet protection
The other a bunny

:ninja:

Let's see if I can
I'll try my best to complete
the test of haikus

*reads the end of the Wanderings poem* O.O

Days of trying
Day after day

Each time we fail
Each attempt pointless

To convince you of our love
To have our hearts approved

I want to be with her
I need to be with her

You try to pull us apart
You pay no heed to our desire

Picking a man she will not love
Picking a man unlike herself

She will love no man but me
She wishes that you would see

lol XD it worked... I do that to poems at times... add in a bunny... idk why it's always a bunny...
=3 haikus don't have to make sense too...

Proof XD: http://4.bp.blogspot.com/_0cnXYhlBk1...rate+haiku.jpg (not mine btw)

XD epic haiku!!

and i like the poem above, absolutely love the first two lines.

mhmm me too. I wonder what my mom would think if she read these..

here is one of my favorites that i've written

The girls cry out, “Witch!”
Another falls and the crowd roars
“This is justice,” the magistrate says
“We will banish the devil,” the reverend cries.
“Witch! Witch!”
That is Abigail Williams,
Leading her posse
Condemning men and women,
Old and young,
Well-off and scum,
Condemning us all…
Seeking her vengeance,
Seeking vengeance for them all
“Witch! Witch!”
The town roars, another falls.
The noose is ready about his neck,
He is reading, accepting his fate,
His goodness finally found.
A lever’s pulled and the last man falls…
…
And so do we all…

I might have to send her a few poems... >.< make her understand how her selfish behavior hurts us all...

That poems reminds me of the Salem witch trials...

exactly. I wrote it after reading the crucible.