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strange_dreams_512 07-25-2010 09:29 AM

LOL BUT I WONT BE THE ONE THROWING IT ON YOU....

That is the job for our guestsss XD

The Wandering Poet 07-25-2010 10:43 AM

If we do it yeah... =) maybe get feedback when we make our wedding hangout?

strange_dreams_512 07-25-2010 10:51 AM

Lol yeah I think either that or bubbles would be cool (:

The Wandering Poet 07-25-2010 10:57 AM

Bubbles would be fun... get 20 mini bubble blowers?

strange_dreams_512 07-25-2010 11:06 AM

(: heheh either that or small packets of rice

The Wandering Poet 07-25-2010 12:18 PM

true true... we'll have plenty of rice ne?

strange_dreams_512 07-26-2010 03:44 AM

Of course we will hehe :3 the numminess of...... i dont know what word goes there next. XD Any ideas? ahahah

The Wandering Poet 07-26-2010 04:25 AM

the soft squishy grains of happiness

strange_dreams_512 07-26-2010 04:37 AM

:D yesss that lol..! perfect wording XD hahaha

The Wandering Poet 07-26-2010 06:17 AM

XD Well I AM a fan of it

strange_dreams_512 07-26-2010 11:34 AM

OMG ME TOO.

...
LOL LIKE I DIDN'T KNOW... XD Of course you like it hahah we both do :3 which makes it all the more a reason never to run out Xd hahahah :3 yaysss

The Wandering Poet 07-26-2010 08:20 PM

hmm... hey what kind of food you wanna m- *poetic/food combination screws mind*-ake during the visit?

Got a really weird idea to like... make a cake with a poem written on it with frosting @[email protected] :drool:

Edit - Hey if someone actually wants to do that XD That'd be epic to see

strange_dreams_512 07-27-2010 04:56 AM

I WANNA XD
Let's shall XD

The Wandering Poet 07-27-2010 06:24 AM

:lol: maybe... we DO need practice before making a wedding cake after all...

XD just realized... there's so less poems than just mindless chatter here nowadays

leasfy 07-27-2010 09:55 AM

-stalks poet- :D

strange_dreams_512 07-27-2010 03:10 PM

Hahah no that's my job. XD

And yeah well I would write a poem but I'm too busy daydreaming XD
Sounds like fun!! :D

The Wandering Poet 07-27-2010 08:52 PM

@ leas - Wha? Not stalking jen?

SheWhoShallNotBeNamed 08-04-2010 03:23 AM

Im not good at writing poems. I wrote 1 good one i think. but its really short.

Darker and darker everyday.
Darker and darker till I fade away.
Darker and darker cause there is no light.
No need to argue, no need to fight.
So you just keep yelling and I'll just agree.
Till there's no more darkness and the light sets me free.
-Im not afraid of the dark.


Feedback is welcome :^)

The Wandering Poet 08-07-2010 03:50 AM

^^ Good poem, very short and simple, and a bit ironic. I got the feeling as if it were written from the perspective of a child written to a parent (likely a bit from personal experience)

=) should write more... you do a really good job. Only real thing I see is in the first line the 2nd darker has a capital D while the other 2 lines' 2nd D is lowercase.

strange_dreams_512 08-11-2010 04:15 AM

Don't even ask me
The reasons for tomorrow
Don't even wonder
What else will come
I'll just stay by you
If you walk with the stars
I'll just stay by you
The sun

The Wandering Poet 08-17-2010 03:05 AM

I wander from place to place
With paper just in case

Across the internet I travel
It's secrets I will unravel

But when I'm tired at night
Sky lit by star light

I wander to my den
Where my home has been

With my feet worn and raw
I rest in my home Menewsha

strange_dreams_512 08-17-2010 05:15 AM

Crispy flames warm the ground
Houses in ruins all around
I knew the day of restitution would come
But did we ever really know where from?
Humans so fragile as lace
In broken glass I see your face
Tears run down, they wash your skin
This isn't life. This is sin.

(inspired by this one movie i saw about the stone of gellell or something from Naruto)

Rinchi 08-17-2010 05:35 AM

Hello

Silent as the wind
tiptoeing through the winter
the last of the birds

strange_dreams_512 08-17-2010 02:59 PM

Oh, hi (: hehe I just saw you.

Glazing on the edge
A life she's always wanted
Watch as she soars high

The Wandering Poet 08-18-2010 07:04 AM

I have no purpose
Because I am not with you
'Till June 26th


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