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Forever Loveless

02-02-2010 11:12 PM

Fallen Apart

Falling Apart
Held Togather
Not quiet sane
On the brink of insanity
Trying to creep back
Closer to the thing called sanity
Scars on her arms
Pain in her heart
Pulling her apart
Breaking everyting she knew
All alone and no one cares
No one can know how she is falling
Falling...
Falling...
Fallen Apart

Al the Strange

02-05-2010 09:15 PM

It sounds like lyrics... I love it. I can't think of any other words. :]

Fang13

02-07-2010 07:18 PM

It does sound like lyrics.

Punctuation would be nice though. Tells you where to pause and for how long...

Forever Loveless

02-08-2010 10:51 PM

thnx!!

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