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BloodyLuciel 02-20-2010 07:00 AM

A Call To Us{One of my favorite poems!}
 
A Call To Us
by,BloodyLuciel

Where are you my child?
Where have you gone?
Have you forgotten me?
Do you not love me anymore?

I am waiting here my child
With my arms wide open
So I could embrace you tenderly
Then you will know

What are you doing my child?
Have you committed any sins?
Do you not pray my child?
Where is your faith?

Come here my dear child
You should not be afraid
I am not angry my child
Surely, you know

Where are you my child?
Please come back to me
Do not have fear my child
For you are welcome and forgiven


Just message me on what you think about my poem!
Negative and Positive criticism will be welcomed! :XD


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