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TanaChan 10-03-2010 06:05 AM

I think not
for a lost soul is a soul alone
and alone we can not find the brighter path
With none to guide us what are we to do?

xRhii 10-03-2010 06:42 PM

But we cannot be the only ones alone
For on this path are others
Souls just as lost, waiting to be found
They come from near and far
Wandering as we do,
Searching all around.

Katlyn 10-04-2010 12:30 AM

Sometimes we are blind
We are one but do not see eachother,
We are deaf..
We yell to one another but do not hear,
and although we walk hand in hand,
We do not feel..
We are alone in our senses..

Whisper Invictus 10-04-2010 03:25 PM

How can we live then?
A heart does not beat
It feels nothing
Without the love of another.

We are simply not.
Blind to you,
Deaf to me.

Undiscovered for eternity.


((We're almost to 15 guys :eager: thanks so much for the love! Everyone who posts on page 15 will get gold and one person will get an awesome prize!

Also, if you guys haven't heard of NaNoWriMo, try it out! It starts next month~ Here is my account, add me if you decide to sign up and devote your awesome talents! leann.whispr | National Novel Writing Month))

Katlyn 10-04-2010 04:27 PM

((Yayyy that's awesome!! I am having a creativity block atm so I'll add after someone else does..))

Acheron 10-04-2010 07:24 PM

The world spins
Blind to humans.
We are not needed,
And rage creates us beasts.

Find our soul
And we will be freed.


((This is Whisper on her mule~ try not to post without having some verse in it ;) thank youuuuu ))

x_cannibalisticcows 10-05-2010 10:03 PM

How do you find something that isn't there?
Something that is less tangible than air.
You search for it with your heart.
Eyes closed.
Mind open.

Remember.
There is no darkness,
Only an absence of light.


||I signed up for NaNoWriMo! I'm uber excited about it! It is a great way for me to earn some creativity hours! :D||

bloodstainedwings 10-10-2010 05:07 PM

but in this absence of light
where darkness looms
the light that stays seem bright
brighter for the doom and gloom

it is easy to see the light we seek
ever distant though it may be
whether we be strong or weak
reaching the light is the key

time turns as you reach and try
to grasp that light
wherever it may lie
in this never ending fight

((hope its ok that i join. i may never post again, but i thought it might be fun.))

x_cannibalisticcows 10-11-2010 03:15 AM

What we are all trying to grasp - is what we're told to run away from.
Don't walk towards the light. Come back come back to us.
We will hold onto you - with iron grips - metal clasps.
Don't run. Come back come back to us.

bloodstainedwings 10-11-2010 01:09 PM

but going back would be a set back in the progress of life
for to die is the next great adventure
life if full of hardships and strife
to die would be a great release, a freedom if you will

release your burdens
lay down your worries
fly with the wings of freedom
and the embrace of death

x_cannibalisticcows 10-12-2010 11:42 PM

With death we are reborn.
A new born babe, gasping for its first breath.
Things that were once torn,
Are fixed again, because of the product of death.

||Page fifteen! : D||

bloodstainedwings 10-13-2010 01:42 AM

the world seems new and bright
nothing could be wrong or right
innocence divine and brilliant light
overwhelming and a brand new sight

no pain
no fears
no worries
no cares

((yeah! page 15! congratulations whisper!))

x_cannibalisticcows 10-13-2010 02:29 AM

No pain.
No fears.
No worries.
No cares.

No pain...
No fears...
No worries...
No cares...

NO PAIN!
NO FEARS!
NO WORRIES!
NO CARES!!!

Growing stronger with their cries the world shouts out.
Happy to have a leader who knows a thing about,
what the people want. Who will teach without a doubt.
And chant with the crowd until the lights go out.

bloodstainedwings 10-13-2010 03:16 AM

in the darkness the chanting swells
no longer alone, no longer silent
my eyes can see the star that shine
but mine are not the only ones

the world united chanting their sorrows
and in the darkness something grows
a thing a small as a dove
a thing i hear its called love.

((im really glad you liked how i ended that poem above... i wasnt sure about it, but it ended up working really well... your really good!))

x_cannibalisticcows 10-13-2010 10:16 PM

||Thank you! :] I really enjoy your verses. They really give me something to work with. ^^||

What is love?
Baby don't hurt me...don't hurt me- JUST KIDDING.||

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Love.
Fragile and strong.
These bonds.
Nothing can break them,
at least nothing real.

Words.
Loves chiefest enemy.
They cut.
But they can also mend.
The healing words of a friend.

Choose.
Your words carefully...

bloodstainedwings 10-14-2010 02:44 AM

((great way to end that part! holy wow thats brilliant!))

but words are just that
words
it tis the meaning we put behind them that hurt
us so willing to throw words around
like balls of snow in the winter

whether cold or hot
our conversations define us
our tone define the words
and our attitude determines everything else

but what is everything else?
except more words

McNugget 10-14-2010 06:42 PM

And of death
there is life
and of life
there is death
a cycle it is
that never ends
untill the end
that is time

Whisper Invictus 10-14-2010 09:26 PM

((Sorry for such the long wait, Whiwhi here had to work all week >.< but anywho~~

Yay Page 15! And for every Menewshan who posts on this page, they will get 50g~!! ;) And for canni, the first poster, you will get a September CI set! :squee:

Thank you so much to everyone who supports the Poetry Forums! ^__^ ))


---~

But time,
It doesn't exist.
You don't have it.
Find friendship,
Then love.
Find hope,
then beilief.

And then.
Time will begin.

McNugget 10-14-2010 09:37 PM

And then time will run
and be bright
like a shining star
only one of many.

x_cannibalisticcows 10-14-2010 10:26 PM

There is nothing like the warm glow,
of a star to chase away the night.
But don't get too close,,
For flames do like to bite.

But set ablaze your own star,
to dance among the flames.
Get a little closer,
To play a little love game.

||Aha, I'm so excited!! I adore this thread!
And thank you so much! I love the CIs||

Sheogorath 10-17-2010 04:07 AM

So you play the little game,
and you take a little blame
for the actions which can shame you
when your passions lead to pain.

And you dance the whole night long
when they do the same to you;
there is nothing in the whole world
that can last the whole night through!

Not your sorrow,
Not your tears,
Not those cruel eyes and the fears
They engender in your heart
(Which should have shut up from the start,)

So you go a little mad
in escaping what you've had.
Who knew romance could be BAD?
Dancing faster, mania-clad.

Time to dance for Lady GaGa
whom you worship like a dog,
who lets you fly like Baba Yaga
through the thick Ukranian Fog,

Til the world becomes a blur
and you can dictate what you were:

So you say your love was Ugly,
and you say their Heart was Bad.
And in dancing to these things, you find yourself a little glad.
You should thank your faithful gods, who, in their mercy, made you mad.

Whisper Invictus 10-17-2010 03:28 PM

Love can make you mad,
And dancing wipes it all away.
All the memories of pain,
Of joy and sadness, of blame.

Find peace in dancing,
For love does not exist
Unless you live among the stars!


((I'm glad you like this thread canni! ^__^ and be careful on the length there Sheogorath :) Make sure the verse(s) are relevant to the previous posts <333 ))

Eastriel 10-17-2010 04:12 PM

There is no peace in dancing
not for me
there is no peace in anything
not since you left me
I wish for peace
It wish it with all my heart
I search, I look hoping to find
that restful feeling...

bloodstainedwings 10-17-2010 04:14 PM

love strikes you like a wall
taking the breath of life away
then it floods back in
and takes you for a wild ride

up and down,
ebb and flow
the rush of love
like a river in flood
overwhemling
unkind
and more joyous than anything

love is life, and life is love
crule and wonderful
needed and hated
wanted and rejected
unending contradiction

Wrenji-chan 10-19-2010 04:28 AM

wanting, you can't have it...
desire, You don't need enough...
lust, your soul burns with it...
love,your treacherous journey begins...

rejection, I love you but...
disgust, You repulse me.
celibacy, You're not the one I'm waiting for...
hate, Leave me alone. I mean it.


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