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This is basically just a thread for new users and old users to post their poems and get honest criticism from others! (: Please don't be offense or rude. ):
One of my poems that was actually showcased in a literature convention Don't you Don’t you hate When people think They know every mistake Miss-step and fall You’ve made When really, They know Nothing at all? Don’t you want To scream when People seem to hunt Others to judge Behind backs And seem to carry An all-hating Grudge? Don’t you cry When someone you know Doesn’t even try To stop the change Of becoming A person you used to know And now they’re just An old friend estranged? Don’t you wish That when something is done You could be spared the anguish Of trying to hold on To a thing Or person That is so Long gone? Don’t you crave The ability to tell What road you’ll pave In this game called Life That is never Ending and seems To be one Big strife? Don’t you know That the truths Hidden will be shown And in time things will Eventually, finally, Oh so perfectly, Absolutely Fit the bill?[COLOR="Silver"] ---------- well, i had another poem here, but it messed up. so no other poem here ): ---------- just another poem i wrote... You pull me close Then push us apart We seem to grow so close And end up back at the start And I’m beginning to think I’ve fallen hard for you but I fear I’ll crash With a single blink You reminisce me But then forget it all And I should’ve known This game comes with a fee You say you’re lost Without me But then you go on to say With her you’re still star-crossed And you make me feel So warm and loved But hiding beneath Is this feeling so surreal Please, no more of this game Because soon I’ll crash And my heart Will turn aflame |
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