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Hamii 04-07-2010 05:02 AM

What you think of my Arts. =^-^=
 
I did two Arts this week so far. What you think of them? I'll add some more Arts later.


Headshot Dream Avi. 4/5/10
Mr. Mayor 4/6/10


Dream Avi
http://www.menewsha.com/forum/member...cture36365.jpg

Mr. Mayor
http://www.menewsha.com/forum/member...cture36488.jpg

Blood Savant 04-09-2010 06:55 PM

1) Very cute lines. :3 What I suggest you to do - unless it is your trademark style that you do not wish to change - maybe blend in the colors a bit? You've done a nice job selecting several shades, but the blending is a little bit awkward and draws the attention to the brush strokes that are very rough. Smudging and blending in colours is a good skill to have. ^^ It prevents the picture from appearing "flat."

2) Your second piece is much more better blended yet the shadows are not as smooth as they could be. Again, this is just my opinion. You might consider using other colours than black for lines. You could use shades similar to the color of what the item's color is. E.g. for that bottle you could use a darker/grayish blue instead of the black.

Otherwise, very cute concepts. I love the piece of Mr. Mayor. =3

MyLostEmpireKing 04-10-2010 03:32 PM

I really like the hat of the first one! The chibi in the second is really cute! :)

Hamii 04-17-2010 05:11 AM

@Blood: The first drawing was on GIMP and Yea it need to blend in tho. The 2nd one, Yea I know it dark but I like it stand out alittle tho. But I'll try using fade blue or make my line smaller. I use paint tool SAI on Mr. Mayor. =^-^=

@King: Tyy =^-^=


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