FEED BACK PLEASE
 

THis is a song I wrote for English class, it's still a little rough, but I just wanted feed back =)


Her

Chorus: When I got him I thanked the stars
But every time I see him look at her I sob to the heavens

Your hands are dry, while mine are sweating nervously
When we're flesh to flesh, where are the goosebumps like I get?
Sometimes I get the feeling you wish I'd leave and magically come back her

These sad brown eyes wont ever be the blue of hers
And my dark hair will never turn to the blonde he wants
This broken body wont shed those unwanted pounds

Chorus x2

Why must you look at her like I want you to look at me?
Why must you love her, like I love you?

Chorus

Why can't I be loved?
Why can't I get the look you give her, from just anyone?

Chorus

Why must I love the already in love, instead of being apart of the loved