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OriginalSin 08-06-2010 05:25 AM

[[Sorry guys! I messed up the chain haha, I didnt get to read Kishiya's post before I posted mine, and then had to go back and re-qrite the whole thing. Sorryyyy]]

Blue Demon 08-06-2010 05:27 AM

Kuri coudnt take it anymore! seeing that much blood was driving her crazy. She ran away from Kathrin without even so much as a glance, she just couldnt handle seeing that much blood and guts.

Kathrin handnt noticed Kuri left after the first few minuted but when she went to grab her hand she noticed she wasnt there. She looked around not seeing her anywhere "Kuri?!" she yelled running around the halls trying to find her, she eventually did find her split in half. Kathrin stared at her sisters body and screamed at the top of her lungs, she slowly fell to her knees crying her eyes out.

Lady Angel Konan 08-06-2010 05:28 AM

Agoni growled loudly clenching his sister close to him. "The killer will pay...." he stated in a dark growl

Pein felt lost Dusk was his only true friend, he fell to his knees as he began to cry hard "I loved her....." he said softly to himself as he wept.

flamethrower1391 08-06-2010 05:35 AM

(Now for comic relief, or at least an attempt at it.)
Takayumi retracted her one blade and patted Agoni on the back. "The killer will not get away." She looked down at her hand and noticed that his back was bare. "Oh my god." She stepped away and turned around. "Uh, I think you should put some clothes on before you go after the killer." She was still a little kid when it came to seeing someone naked.

OriginalSin 08-06-2010 05:38 AM

Shilo heard yet another scream, and she closed her eyes, wishing that the day had never happened and that it was all just some massive nightmare. "Agoni, my prince? I must go. Please, dont do anything stupid my love. I will be back" she whispered, and on her way out of the room, she stopped by Pein and ran her hand across his head. "I am sorry for your loss. She was truly your best friend, but dont worry. We will get this killer" she sighed and walked out.

When Shilo found the next massacre scene, she froze. "No. NO!" she began to scream. This one was definately personal. Little Kuri had been so sweet and innocent and full of life. "Kathrin!" she shouted and ran over to the freiving sister of the small dead child. "Oh god, I'm so sorry! I should have stayed with you, she might not have gotten away" Shilo cried and hugged Kathrin tightly. These murders had to stop.

Yufie Panda 08-06-2010 05:38 AM

As Lexia was walking along the halls, She wondered "Where's all the people, It feels .. strangely quiet" A few minutes later, she found blood and a split body into half. Lexia gasped "What is this!?" She said shockingly, Then .. She walked away and saw two people, the other one had a blade on her hand. "Oh My God, What is this place!? .. I thought this was a school?" She said it loudly, and forgot that there were two people infront of her, She suddenly placed her hand on her mouth and said softly .. "Oops."

flamethrower1391 08-06-2010 05:44 AM

Keyosi heard someone talking. She's alone. I don't sense anyone around her. He ran toward the girl. "Are you okay?" He looked down at the body. "You should not be walking these halls alone. It's quite dangerous."
Takayumi sighed. "I wish this dude would just stay in one place, so we can take him out." She ran down the hall before stopping. The killer comes after people who are alone. This person hasn't attacked a group yet, so if I stay alone, maybe he or she will come after me, and I will get my chance.

Lady Angel Konan 08-06-2010 05:49 AM

Agoni growled becoming a primal Demon, his hair was dark, his eye glowed red "I will kill that bastard" he said bolting out of the room.

OriginalSin 08-06-2010 05:49 AM

Cassie had tears pouring down her face. She kept hearing all of these horrible screams and there were definately a lot of people crying. This was rediculous. How could one person get away with all of this killing and murder? It was impossible.

The room was dark, and there was no noise apart form the faint sobbing sounds of girls and even men and the ocasional scream. It was because it was so quiet that Cassie heard it. A fain whiring noise and then a sound of dripping.

Drip. Drip. Drip.

"What the?" Cassie said and she spun around to see what the noise was. "Oh my GOD!" she screamed and turned to run. There was a sharp pain and a horrible ripping sound, and Cassie realised with agony and shock that her wings had been torn clean off. She was screaming and writhing in pain, and there was nothing she could do because without her wings she couldnt walk.

Her body started to go numb and she started to get really tired, but there was still a sense of what was going on in the room. She could feel cold hands, picking her up and wrapping something around her feet. Then the world turned upside down and she knew that she had been suspended from the ceiling. Now the dripping sound was coming from her. It was the noise of the blood dripping from the cavities where her wings used to be.

"Please" she whispered, with all of her energy. Then the worst pain of all, and possibly the one that killed her...

The murderer ripped her halo away form her. No matter how tired she was, or how close to death, she screamed and cried and screamed some more when they did that. It felt like she had her whole life ripped right out of her brain, and then she remembered nothing but the sound of her body being ripped in two and then three, then four. Then darkness. No sound. No nothing.

Blue Demon 08-06-2010 05:51 AM

Kathrin could barley breathe, Kuri's clothes and eyes were no longer raindow, they were dark red. She stood up and wipped her tears away even though it was useless since fresh tears kept running down her cheeks "S-she had so much to live for...S-she was only twelve" she said, looking down at her sisters lifless body.

flamethrower1391 08-06-2010 05:52 AM

Takayumi heard the scream. It was coming from another dorm. She ran toward the sound and threw the door open. Cassie was hanging from the roof. She ran up to the girl and cut her down. She held the girl's head up. "Oh please be alive. Please say something." She listened to her breathing, but she couldn't tell for sure.

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(I think it's funny that we're killing off our character.)

Yufie Panda 08-06-2010 05:57 AM

"Are you okay?" He looked down at the body. "You should not be walking these halls alone. It's quite dangerous." Said by the guy.

She sighed and said "I'm fine indeed, I just happened to walk by the halls and started seeing blood all over the walls and floor .. What about this body?! What happened he--" Lexia heard a very powerful scream and said "What's that!?" She panicked.

flamethrower1391 08-06-2010 05:59 AM

Keyosi wrapped his arms around the girl. "It's okay. Don't panick. We are going to get the killer." He looked around the hall. "We should get you somewhere safe." Wherever that may be anymore.

Lady Angel Konan 08-06-2010 06:06 AM

Agoni heard the scream as he grabbed Kathrine and Shilo and took off leaving the body behind he landed in front of cassies door placing the to women down he kicked down the door, he saw the angel and his jaw dropped he didnt understand how all of this could be happening... all he knew was when he found the killer he was going to destroy every fiber of its being...

OriginalSin 08-06-2010 06:07 AM

Shilo couldnt breath. She stopped running from massacre to massacre and walked away curling up into a tiny ball on the floor. She was alone, but she didnt care. The death and chaos that surrounded her was enough for her to wish she was dead. She was a healer, and had been all of her life, but yet, these bodies were all distorted and torn up that there was just nothing she could do to help them. Bringing someone back together was one thing, but PUTTING somone back together was an entirely different scinario.


The halls went quiet and Shilo knew that soon there would be another scream, and then another and then another. This was going to carry on all night, but what seemed odd was that all of the murders had been to girls. And everyone that had been killed had been alone.

They needed to find the killer, but how? Shilo heard faint footstephs behind her, but she didnt bother to look up. She was too scared, and she knew that it was probably just someone checking on her. "Go away!" she screamed as they neared her. Then there was a sharp pain in her stomach and Shilo knew there and then that she was the next scream anyone was going to hear.

"Agoni!" she screamed, with all of her power and breath. She didnt care if she survived, all that she cared about was that everyones death had been avenged. She knew Agoni could kill the murderer. He just needed to find him.

Yufie Panda 08-06-2010 06:08 AM

Keyosi wrapped his arms around the girl. "It's okay. Don't panick. We are going to get the killer."

"Uhm, Thank you" As Lexia was being wrapped around by the guy's arms she asked "What's your name by the way, It seems that you're the first person I get to know around this school."

Lady Angel Konan 08-06-2010 06:09 AM

(kill my last post)

Agoni screamed as he ripped the killer away from his fiance, throwing it as the shadows engulfed him and Shilo healing her injuries.

His eyes glowed red as his hair seemed to move on it own around him, "I WILL KILL YOU MOTHER F^*KER!!!!" he yelled as he plunged his claws deep in to the killers chest.

(EVERYONE NEEDS TO SLOWWWWWWW DOWWWWNNNNNN!!!!!!!!!)

flamethrower1391 08-06-2010 06:12 AM

Keyosi looked down at the girl. "My name is Keyosi. What's yours?"
Takayumi sighed. The girl was not alive. Yet another was killed. She stood up after resting Cassie's head gently on the floor. "Okay, that's it. You are dead." Her eyes grew red with bloodthirst. She was going to kill the murder if it was the last thing she did.

Yufie Panda 08-06-2010 06:17 AM

"Nice to meet you Keyosi, My name is Lexia .. I can help you find the murderer, Let's go back to the past!" As she was pulling Keyosi's arm "Let's go! Let's go!"

flamethrower1391 08-06-2010 06:19 AM

Keyosi smiled, "Let's do."

Lady Angel Konan 08-06-2010 06:24 AM

Agoni held the killers throat tight "So you think your going to kill the future Queen of Almaria..... well you are going to have to get threw the king first" he growled as he slammed the killer in to the ground.

The shadows danced around shilo healing her slowly instead of transfering

"SHILO DONT DIE ON ME!!!" he Growled as he continued to beat the tar out if the person.

OriginalSin 08-06-2010 06:24 AM

Shilo opened her eyes and was extatic to see that Agoni had come to rescue her and found the murderer. Now all that was left to do was kill him and find out who it was.

Standing shakily, Shilo tried to walk over to where Cassie had been. Someone rounded the corner and held out a knife to cut her open with. Confusion hit, and her instincts took over. Shilo kicked the mans neck as hard as she could and then wrapped her leg around his neck, snapping it in two different places. Looking back, Shilo saw that Agoni was still wresting with the murderer. "There isnt only one!" she screamed, and then stopped abruptly. There was a demon hovering above Agoni. He was menacing and evil, and holding a blade as sharp as a sheet of glass.

"Get the hell away from him!" she screamd and as she ran towards them, she pulled Takayumi with her, saying "you help Agoni, I'll get rid of this guy!" she then she attacked. Another advantage to being a vampire. Speed! The demon never even saw her coming, and as she took his blade off him and plunged it deep into his brain, she realised who it was.

"Oh hell no!" she creid, and fell to the floor.



Kai shuddered. It was unexpected and shocking, but Shilo had taken his blade off him and plunged it deep into his own brain. He was still alive, they could never kill him... He was part of the undead.

flamethrower1391 08-06-2010 06:31 AM

Takayumi raised in hand in front of her. "No problem." She walked up to the killer and thrust her blade into him, so that he would live a bit longer if Agoni had decided to torture him or her (we need to pick which it is) for all that he/she has done. She pulled her blade out slowly. Before she pulled it out the rest of the way, she twisted it. "You should not have done what you did. Now you must pay with your life."

Strawberry CoCo Monkey 08-06-2010 06:37 AM

Light walked into the her knew school and looked around,it was so dark and there was a hint of blood in the air which made her fell sick. She roamed the halls trying to find someone to talk to, after walking around the halls for ten minutes she came upon a ground of people fighting. When she saw how much blood there was she quickly covered her mouth, it was disgusting seeing that much blood in one place.

Lady Angel Konan 08-06-2010 06:38 AM

"Filthy undead" he growled throwing the corpse at the wall he walked over to kai picking him up with the blade in his head "In my land we know how to kill the undead" he growled as shadows became excited agoni tossed him to the shadows which slowly piece by piece began to devour him.


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