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G-Dragon 06-29-2010 10:41 PM

A Poetic Person?
 
So, I have some poetry from wayy back then and some new ones too. Critique (not too harsh please!) is welcomed. Thanks everyone (:

(Just one for now.
I don't really like how I ended this one..)

An Untouched Kiss

If it's for you then I'll give you my world
For all the epochs I lay beside you and curled
With pain and agony, joy and laughter,
Leaves me with no happily ever after.

As your gentle lips untouched with mine
You hugged me and took me of my last line
Like a hero of wars, you led me to my life
Like a shining sword, you walked me through my strife.

Your love was a strong Twinkle Star
Like a Budweiser at a nonchalant bar
You grasped me and never took leave
You drank me until I poured out of your sleeves.

I lived my life with you 'till my last breath,
And then I realized, "Hey aren't you death?"

G-Dragon 07-01-2010 01:27 AM

A second poem.

Divine

A trail of feathers
Dances, following an
Unearthly being.
Her wing is a fan
Intricate with details,
Yet purified by simplicity.
Symbol of the masses
Gazing on the liberty.
Soars above the skies,
Crossing the many fates,
Protector of the heavenly bodies
Of the stronghold of the United States.


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