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A Poetic Person?
So, I have some poetry from wayy back then and some new ones too. Critique (not too harsh please!) is welcomed. Thanks everyone (:
(Just one for now. I don't really like how I ended this one..) An Untouched Kiss If it's for you then I'll give you my world For all the epochs I lay beside you and curled With pain and agony, joy and laughter, Leaves me with no happily ever after. As your gentle lips untouched with mine You hugged me and took me of my last line Like a hero of wars, you led me to my life Like a shining sword, you walked me through my strife. Your love was a strong Twinkle Star Like a Budweiser at a nonchalant bar You grasped me and never took leave You drank me until I poured out of your sleeves. I lived my life with you 'till my last breath, And then I realized, "Hey aren't you death?" |
A second poem.
Divine A trail of feathers Dances, following an Unearthly being. Her wing is a fan Intricate with details, Yet purified by simplicity. Symbol of the masses Gazing on the liberty. Soars above the skies, Crossing the many fates, Protector of the heavenly bodies Of the stronghold of the United States. |
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