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The_Cheh 07-23-2010 08:29 PM

Just random doodles
 
Well, just drew this recently and took a pic of it via my cell phone but I put it here:

http://i140.photobucket.com/albums/r...eanDrawing.jpg

I really would like some criticism on this. It's based off of my avatar. I know the coloring is way off but I have limited colors in my colored pencils lol and there is no shading so I at least know that much. But I'm trying to learn anatomy a bit more before I tackle more complex anime, if that makes sense. Anyway, any to all criticism is greatly appreciated!! So please crit and thank you for the crits!

A lot of my other art is here at artgrounds:
ArtGrounds - Profile of Cheh

leasfy 07-24-2010 08:26 AM

It's good! even though its lacking of color shade, you have managed well so far!
Well, the wing needs to be drawn a bit higher since it seems a bit down or somethin . . . if you know what I meant.
Oh and also the strip lines for the sword ... perhaps should not be drawn too many D:

The_Cheh 07-25-2010 06:28 PM

I understand what you mean about the sword! I didn't notice that at all when I drew it, thank you very much!


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