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For When...
For when we felt tiny, We both became giant For when we were the employer, We both were the client For when we talked, We were silent For when we were peaceful, We both were violent For if we called, It was dropped For if we dialed, It had stopped For if we skipped, We had hopped For if we switched, We also had swapped Inspiration: Antonyms and Synonyms / Cause and Effect. In another poem, I had critiqued I thought one of the words was a bit plain, so I gave some synonyms. I was in the writing passion so I decided to write a poem. Most of the poems had to about love, death and other common things, so this on was one of those cause and effect poems. As you can see, when you skip you hop, they are almost similar and it seems that you do one to do the other. Hearing of the new I-Phone 4 it drops calls if you held it in a particular way, so I have heard so I kind of added a stanza dealing with that. |
I like it. It's a nice little ditty that flows really well.
Only critique? The last line: Quote:
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