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ronneh 07-27-2010 09:37 AM

5-word Poetry game!
 
didn't see anything like this on here yet, but if there is, i will delete~

how to play-
the player above you has posted 5 words like this:
Worm // Outback // Games // Sword // Quite

you use those words [at least 3 or you can use them all~] in a poem!
you can also use a different form of the word like if the word was fall, you could use falling or fell.
like this:

a parasite
worming its way
into your heart
not the usual duel
of a stick for a sword
having to fight this one off
with your own hope for living
quite the game,
quite the challenge
the human;
the bug
which has a stronger will
to live?

[i used four of them D8 ]

then you post 5 more words for the player beneath you.
like this:
piece // star // jump // wind // sore

continue the game!

Popcorn Gun 08-01-2010 08:00 AM

A piece of your heart was all I had ever wanted
A moment of your attention
Just once for you to mention
Me

Acknowledge me
And everything I would do for you
All the hoops I jumped for you
All the things I changed
All the things I did

It's sad
But I guess only fitting
That I wind up like this
Everything amiss

I wanted to be your treasure
Because you're my star
But it would seems living like this
I've fallen so far

So far from the person
I used to be
So far from everything
That made me happy

So far
from me

-------------
That was pretty fun actually.
:' )

Next words::


jagged * ajar * sweeping * voice * smooth

Lexadis 08-03-2010 10:46 AM

The poor old girl,
Was left alone,
In the little lane,
Jagged with nothing,
To eat or drink.

She went looking for houses,
But the doors were ajar.
She looked at the skies,
Praying to God,
For food and shelter.

In the sweeping night,
And the terrible snow,
the poor girl faced a hardship,
That one couldn't forget.

She tried to sleep,
But the ground was cold,
And frozen,
With snow,
Smooth as glass.

She suddenly heard a noise,
From the skies.
looking above,
She heard a voice,
That she had never heard before.

the voice was smooth, clear,
And the voice was beautiful,
As if playing a harp.
The girl looked up,
Again,
And saw a light,
Falling towards her.
She stood up,
And she went above,
To the skies and the heaven,
And to meet the God.


WORDSllll Active lll Gold lll Sun lll Blazing lll terrible

wrylilt 08-05-2010 08:32 AM

Active gold sun blazing terrible

Sun of gold hangs in the sky
Blazing harsh and terrible
I wish I could be active but,
The burning is unbearable.

[There was no minimum word count, right? :)]

Next set of words:

Round/Fountain/Cat/Angle/Leaf

Margo 08-06-2010 02:57 AM

Glimmering drops splatter about
like a fountain a spew.

You cannot help but stare,
for you are the only one who knew.

It's the end of the story, Your character now round,
your eyes tell it all, catlike and bound.

You completed the deed, but at what cost?
Can you live with the grief?

You tortured soul, You'll find yourself lost.
But the price was good, green as a leaf...

Was it worth it?



love//perish//brimstone//mythrill//orchid

wrylilt 08-06-2010 11:12 AM

The ground is green, green as mythrill,
The sky is the red of orchid fire
My love for you is rare and fickle
And it will perish in the mire

Brimstones fall upon our lives
Cruel barbs of red hot knives

Rose/Curtain/Chocolate/Light/Fanned

skye davis 08-16-2010 12:27 AM

Rose/Curtain/Chocolate/Light/Fanned

sweet roses love me
hold me in their arms
sweet stars show me
light shines my way
sweet curtains hide me
hide me in the say
i fanned the smell of roses oh so far away
and now i see the chocolate tree has made it still this day
my friends all follow quietly
walking hand in hand
for the things that stand before us were not put there by a man.

time/love/sea/door/fall


((i have no idea what i wrote so if it sucks its not my fault :rofl: ))


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