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Harraku 08-06-2010 09:02 PM

My Poetry Page. (Come and take a look, yah?)
 
Soul

The light sprawls through the deadened blinds to land in a heap over the muffled bed spread

a figure moves in silence

her pale feet like dead corpses

and she skitters over the dusty carpet

a hand stretches, the tendons strained, and the joints creak

her eyes like dark flames in the murky night are chained and padlocked

a pop is heard from her broken down body

the light giggles hysterically as it rolls back and forth in mirth over the bed

she ignores it and continues forward

the sludge that heaps around her is like concrete, weighing her down

skin droops and cracks over her razor sharp bones

and she strides forward.

the blinds stand shoulder to shoulder, unmoving soldiers

her mouth is grim as it gapes open in mindless screams
her mind is slowly spiraling down with no pilot to maneuver around the empty buildings.

the hand with the butchered nails clasps the cord that holds the blinds in their frozen position and is yanked down as her body collapses in to dust

and then she is free.


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Tell me if you like it or whatever you want to say about.(^.^)

Chikiri 08-08-2010 05:12 AM

o.o Nice! Very nice indeed.

Harraku 08-08-2010 07:43 AM

O:
Thanks. (>///<)


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