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tavis harts 08-09-2010 05:38 AM

Queen of cards critiques?
 
I just recently finished this and wanted to see what you guys thought. :)

I have a series of queens based on card suits each with their own weapon. After finishing hearts and diamonds I decided to work on clubs.

Heres each of them. Starting with the first, queen of hearts
http://tavisharts.kamiki.net/origina...tavisharts.jpg
She got the guns and was actually the first one colored.

http://tavisharts.kamiki.net/origina...ds2010web2.jpg
This is queen of diamonds. It took a while to figure out her weapon but I decided on an axe due to the sharpness of her element. I ended up giving her a more elaborate background to pair her up with more diamond shapes.

She was done in open canvas and the trees took forever. >.> I decided to try a different coloring style to give them a back highlight. Of course because I also wanted an atmospheric effect along something to make each of the trees unique to keep interest I had to completely change my pallet from tree to tree.
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Guh... no trees for me for a while I swear.

http://i56.photobucket.com/albums/g1...rwebcopy-1.jpg

So what do you think?

Mizayo 08-09-2010 10:29 PM

I think they look really wonderful, but I do believe there are four shapes, yes? Haha, I am only kidding. They really do look very well done. ;)

Mystic 08-10-2010 02:56 AM

Overall they're done pretty well but the characters, especially at the shoulders look very stiff.

Angry__A o i 08-10-2010 12:54 PM

They are really good, I really like the clubs one. But where's spades? =D <3

BinkaKitty 08-10-2010 07:38 PM

really good. the second one's neck looks a little too thick, but still great!

tavis harts 08-11-2010 01:36 AM

Thanks for the compliments.

And thanks for the suggestions Mystic and BinkaKitty

Spades isn't done just yet. I finished the lineart for her but I still need to work on the coloring. :3

Amayaku 08-11-2010 01:44 AM

I love the spades one though. That one is my favorite. They are all really good though. ^_^

13th 08-12-2010 09:27 AM

Oh, I've seen your pics on Ernya and they're still awesome :D

AlkseeyaKC 08-16-2010 08:31 PM

I recognize your work! I really like your art! =D

DangerousDelilah 08-17-2010 08:10 PM

These are amazing! You know, if you drew avata art in this style, it would be like, 4k for 1 or 2!
xx


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