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Demonic.Angel 08-14-2010 11:59 PM

So i drew me and my bf!
 

DangerousDelilah 08-17-2010 08:13 PM

I read the text, and I was like 'Aww! That's so romantic!'
Anyways, I think it's beautiful, but maybe try to make your bf's face a little less feminine. Apart from that, it's amazing! I know I defo can't do anything as close to yours x'D

Demonic.Angel 08-17-2010 09:20 PM

aw thank you :]
And yah my mom even said his lips and eyes looked a bit girly ^^;;

Popcorn Gun 08-17-2010 11:57 PM

Suggestions I would have on making him look less feminine, would be to make his top lip more angular/sharp like it is in the picture, as well as his eyes. They've got sharper angles than the ones you rendered.

Also, don't be afraid to make his eyebrows thicker/more bushy. Unless he's a little metro and gets them done, they're going to be thicker, lol.

I'd also make his neck a bit thicker, and render the side of his nose/nostrils.

Not a bad start though. Keep on going.
:' )

Demonic.Angel 08-18-2010 02:33 PM

Thanks :]
Ill try that :D
I should add more stuff that I drew ^^;

Keyori 08-19-2010 03:51 AM

Yeah, I agree with the critique on the lips. His lower lip looks more round and like it pops out more than in the pic.

I also think that (his) left eyebrow needs to be extended longer towards his nose. I think this might be why his drawn expression appears softer than the photo.

It looks really nice though, great job so far :)

Demonic.Angel 08-19-2010 08:22 PM

Thank you Keyori
Ill work on this pic a bit more ><
It only took about a our to draw anyway XD

Krazy Kiara 08-20-2010 09:13 AM

thats really cute^^

llglassesll 08-23-2010 04:25 PM

Very nice i like the shade and the detail you put in it and the text is romantic :D

iinsanely Sane 08-29-2010 08:28 PM

You two look so cute together ><
As for the picture, there is a lot detail you missed from the photo. You may want to go back and look again, more closely. :)


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