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Eithar 08-17-2010 06:00 AM

Whatcha think about my comic?
 
The art changes some, I kinda used it to try out some different techniques and its also kinda sloppy. But with all that, what do you like? What do you not like? Any ideas on how i can improve?

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Please and thank you

AlkseeyaKC 08-17-2010 02:26 PM

I'll have to come back and read it, *is at work and don't have time,*
You should work on the text a bit more. when you are laying the text over the character, it can get hard to read. You should put it to the side or maybe put a fade around it so its not fighting with the image.
Other wise its looking good to me. =3

Eithar 08-17-2010 11:51 PM

thank you, yeah I've had some trouble with the text, I'm just not rely sure how to do it any other way, other than hand writing and my writings terrible and I'll try to put it away from the characters more.
So do you have any recommendations on another way to put it on there?

AlkseeyaKC 08-18-2010 05:10 PM

Would it be OK if I took a page or two and showed you some examples? lol I'm not the best at explaining thing. XD;
Oh and just wondering, what program do you use to put the text on?

Eithar 08-18-2010 09:52 PM

Yeah that'd be great!!!!
I've just been using paint, I have the gimp to (i just don't know how to add text with it)

AlkseeyaKC 08-18-2010 09:55 PM

OK I'll go snag some a page or two. I don't know anything about how it would work in Paint or Gimp but I'll see if I can research something for you. Uh.. I hope you would not mind waiting till tomorrow though. I need to work on my comic tonight. ^_^;;;
If I gt done fast I will then help though. =3

Eithar 08-18-2010 10:00 PM

no i don't mind waiting, and thank you for your help


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