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RisikaFox 09-12-2010 11:24 PM

I think I'll pass on that date, Gary.

And I'm pretty good with spelling and grammar, so if you need somebody to proof-read the articles I could probably find time to do it.

Gary Stargazer 09-13-2010 01:21 AM

One of the only girls that ever shoots me down, boys aren't that bad you know >:3

@Sizzla: I would love to get someone who could edit it up, as I told you in my PM, I'm not a good editor by any means. In fact in HS english/grammar was one of my weakest subject, i still think I'm crazy for writing stories. Xd

I think I will change the title like you suggest and add on the help wanted tag

Also to the new PDF if you could upload them or email them to me that would be wonderful.

@Risika: If you think you can take care of the editing work you're welcome to give it a shot but you realize it would be a big chunk of stuff each week. We already know Sizzla takes care of her own work but you would be juggling an average of 5 - 7 articles a week, and possibly more if we add more articles.

Sizzla 09-13-2010 03:31 AM

What's your email? I'll send it over. :yes: I have more suggestions in the PDF itself -- stuff about design, typography, etc. I'm not sure what your layout plan is, or who works on it, but I've made a lot of suggestions. XP

Gary Stargazer 09-13-2010 04:12 AM

I will send it to syra as well after i get it, she puts the whole thing together each week.
([email protected])

Vix Viral 09-13-2010 07:34 AM

Terrible pick-up lines. Do it. You can have Inso give you the ones I use on him.

RisikaFox 09-13-2010 08:23 AM

@Gary: Oh, it's not just that, sweetie. I also don't date people I've never met. xP

And I wouldn't mind. Each article(excepting your rant, of course) doesn't seem to be too terribly long. I think I could handle it, if I got the articles early enough. When are submissions usually submitted?

Gary Stargazer 09-13-2010 08:28 AM

normally saturday morning is the deadline, and I'm just teasing about the dating thing. Xd

RisikaFox 09-13-2010 09:34 AM

Ah, that might not be too bad. And I know you're teasing. I'm just a little too serious sometimes. xD

Mystic 09-13-2010 02:25 PM

The layout of the paper bugs me. I went to school for graphic arts though so to me everything has to be perfect. In general though I think that the paper is a good/cute idea.

Sizzla 09-13-2010 02:28 PM

I'll email that to you when I get home this evening Gary. XD

@Mystic: I hear ya'. I'm all about good design too. XD But for a first-time effort, I think it came out okay. XD I'm sure it'll improve as time goes on. They're still learning the ropes. :yes: Maybe you should offer to lay out the paper (if'n you have the spare time)? ;)

My marked-up PDF mostly gets to typography, because I :heart: typography and it's VERY important, but I didn't have time to touch on the actual design itself... I thought it might be too much at once, considering all the textual edits I made. :sweat:

NekoMary 09-13-2010 02:32 PM

^^ Can't wait for the premiere of my comic "Cat n Mouse" More are coming soon Gary ^^

Codette 09-13-2010 04:23 PM

Mystic, Sizzla, I would really appreciate some help with Layout. I also went to school for Graphic Design, but they never taught us anything like this. I didn't know what I was doing, and I still don't. Any advice is greatly appreciated as I have no idea how to set this up.

Sizzla 09-13-2010 04:37 PM

Sure Syraa. :yes: What's your email? I'll just send the PDF to both you and Gary so you can see my notes. :yes:

I think you should just make the design of the newspaper more newspaper-like. Smaller text, several columns of text instead of just one column, etc. There are minor things that I would tweak to make the design more efficient and easier to read.

Codette 09-13-2010 04:53 PM

alright... I'll try to alter it for the next issue.


Sizzla 09-13-2010 04:57 PM

I got your PM, so I'll shoot you the email tonight when I get home. Then after you read through it, you can ask any questions you may have. :yes:

Codette 09-13-2010 05:15 PM

I'll have a few questions for sure....

Gary Stargazer 09-13-2010 05:29 PM

I appreciate all the help, as i said before the paper is always changeable and nothing is set in stone. It's because of feed back and help from our readers and authors that we can get the thing out each week so the more help we get the smoother things go. >:3

Sizzla 09-13-2010 06:13 PM

Sorry I haven't been able to give crit until now. Life has just been hella crazy, and it was just yesterday that I got this thread subscribed and read through the entirety of it.

Can I ask why you chose Nations instead of CD as the home base for this thread? I thought it'd be better suited for CD myself... But Nations is more active, so that's probably a good thing.

Gary Stargazer 09-16-2010 06:30 AM

You're not the only one that has had hectic things to deal with. ><

Gary Stargazer 09-16-2010 05:18 PM

By the way peeps we still need a good editor. >:3

Codette 09-16-2010 05:46 PM

don't look at me!

Gary Stargazer 09-16-2010 06:03 PM

I wouldn't ask you, you do enough work here. I just wish I had the skills to do it.

Codette 09-16-2010 06:17 PM

yeah, I has no grammer skills either

Gary Stargazer 09-16-2010 06:24 PM

*pounces on her* >:3

Lixlaria 09-16-2010 06:26 PM

:lol: I could try my hand at it if no one else is willing. I would have to start it next week tho >.>


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