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Alternativechic 08-30-2010 04:27 PM

Rate me, maybe?
 
Alright, so apparently my friends think I'm pretty good at anime, but I'm feeling I need to improve o.o Anyone up for giving me advice? Here's a few, plus a random collage I did of my favorite band x] Gotta love Linkin Park <33
Anyways:

http://i227.photobucket.com/albums/d...3/Gorillaz.jpg
A Gorillaz pic I drew. I'm glad I didn't screw up Murdoc xD He's the hardest, I think.

http://i227.photobucket.com/albums/d...123/Girlie.jpg
A girlie in a bun, in a dress. Need to work on folding.

http://i227.photobucket.com/albums/d...rl123/Fiya.jpg
Something I did for my school's house. Basically, my house was Spalding and it was all about red and dragons. One of the teachers took the original so I had to make another, not-so-great copy -.-" The hand holding the dragon looks a bit odd o.o

http://i227.photobucket.com/albums/d...urplepen-1.jpg
Something I did only using pens. Again, I need to work on clothing folds ><"

http://i227.photobucket.com/albums/d.../LPcollage.jpg
Aand, my special little collage about Linkin Park. Enjoii ^-^

Hope you guys liked it and be sure to rate and leave a comment. Thanks, baii ^^



PrincessBane 08-31-2010 02:38 PM

I gotta say, the best picture out of all of them is the one of the Gorillaz. I really love the colouring and the poses. Now, the anime ones need some work. The anatomy is off on all of them. Let me break it down alittle bit. On the first picture, she looks like she's being squished together. The pose is alittle awkward and I'm alittle confused on how her leg positioning is. The second pic, the arms do look alittle off and kinda bulgy. Her body is straight and flat, which shouldn't be the case given that that's a girl. Again, the leg that's bent upward shouldn't be out-turned like that. For poses, what I've been told is to use your own body as a reference. Do the pose yourself and look in the mirror. Then you can get the general idea of how you should be drawing it. Now, on the last picture, the face shape needs alittle work. The chin is misaligned, the ear is alittle too big. Also, you should make a point to define her shoulders, since it looks, as it is, like she doesn't have any. Also, the body seems alittle small for the head. Just keep practicing, I'd suggest looking at anatomy books or again, use yourself as a reference. Just keep working and you'll get better!

Oh, and one more thing. If you use pens, I'd suggest doing the outline of the drawing in pencil so that if you make a mistake, you can go back and fix it. Then when you think you're done or the pic is ready, then you draw over the pencil in pen.


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