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Toris Lauriniatis 09-02-2010 08:32 PM

Critique me...?
 
I sketched this in paint last night, and it is still /very/ rough..... Please keep that in mind... ^///^;; http://i987.photobucket.com/albums/a...aliasketch.png
It's my OC, a version of the Holy ROman Empire that is an incubus, and Chibitalia (both from Hetalia Axis Powers).

Prussia The Awesome 09-02-2010 08:35 PM

Hmm, the lineart looks good, better than anything I've done completely on the computer. Wish I had a tablet... Cant wait to see how it turns out!

Toris Lauriniatis 09-02-2010 08:39 PM

^D^ Thank you much, liebe.... *clings to Prussia* Hopefully it'll look a /lot/ better soon...

Lexadis 09-09-2010 07:39 AM

Looks nice, but I think that arm [on that dragon/devil or whatever it is) looks a bit fat to me compared to its body. I don't know whether it was supposed to be like that though, and if so, i'm sure you'll forgive me for a critique ;)


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