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angelclawz 09-16-2010 12:03 AM

mah poems (don't laugh at me)><
 
That Girl in Room seven-three-nine

There was a girl,
a silent girl,
that girl in room seven-three-nine.

She had no classmates,
no papers to grade,
no answers to divine.

That silent girl,
that invisible girl,
that sat in room seven-three-nine.

No seat assigned,
no homework to do,
no teachers to keep her in line.

But you see, that girl,
that silent girl,
had been dead for thirty years time.


I won't let you die

I read your life story,
it made me cry,
to see all the frailty,
and innocence die.

It can't end like this.
I'll help it in living.
In my library for keeping,
and later for giving.

Here it is safe,
from evil and war.
Safe in my care,
to one day restore.


This pain

This pain is all i'm feeling,
it's crammed inside my head.
All these tumultuous emotions,
all these things i fear and dread.

They attack me when i'm sleeping,
while I toss and turn in bed.
I hope they cannot follow me,
past the grave when I am dead.

But I know they can and will,
for there are things you cannot mend.
A shattered soul cannot be whole,
however diligent you tend.

And even though they're evil,
of this I am quite sure.
I let them bully and accost me,
because I don't want a cure.

For these feelings come from within,
in my deepest heart of hearts.
So really, how can I stop the hurt,
where indeed am I to start?

To tell or not to tell

Would you tell me all your fears?
all the things that you hold dear?
Because it it pains me and it sears,
that it isn't me to whom you confide.

I want to help I want to help,
more than anything in my being,
I want to help I want to help,
But I can't heal what I'm not seeing.

Arcturus Sinclair 09-16-2010 12:50 AM

A-meeeew. You needs to be happy. -pokes- I like I won't let you die, though. It's pretty. ^^

angelclawz 09-17-2010 12:27 AM

thankx.(blushes) i never really show my work becase it's too embarrasing. posting it online seems to be easier. i might post more but i dunno.(shuffles awkwardly) GLOMPS!^^

Arcturus Sinclair 09-17-2010 12:47 AM

-flails- -falls- Eeep. We should rp, dearie. -huggles- And post more, post mooooore. :D

IadulDraculai 09-18-2010 04:12 AM

Oh, wow, these are really good! I really liked the 'I Won't Let You Die'.
It moved me in a way, and I think people who read a lot would identify with it :)

angelclawz 09-20-2010 03:34 AM

thnkx. it really means a lot to me that people are enjoying my writing. i'm way too shy to share in person, which is why I love that i can post them.


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