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Im done
The spiraling confusion in my mind
All the things Ive chose to leave behind Most of them haunt me, only some are gone Not sleeping, just thinking, Im up at dawn I wonder if I will ever figure things out I think to myself, "of course!", but in my mind there is some doubt I let the tears run free down my face I turn my head, and hope they dont show a trace I want to tell all the things that are wrong But all these things, Ive kept them in for so long So i turn my head and wipe my eyes I try to forget all the lies As I walk away, I get a thought and I pause Im done with you and all the trouble you cause |
I love the rhyme scheme, also, I feel that I can closely relate to this. Though I'm not sure your original inspiration, or idea, poetry can be interpreted in many ways. I say that this poem in my list comes right after Edgar Allen Poe and Robert Frost...I think I'm in love with your poem.
But seriously, really good poem. You've got a lot of potential |
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