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Simply Poetry ~ Please come in!
Well hello there! I'm Simply Sui Generis, and you've entered my poetry thread. Pretty much, its just going to be a place to post my poems when I write them... or a place for me to come for inspiration when I want to write but can't think of anything.
Just a note: I write a lot of Haikus. I just love the haiku form, so many of the things posted here will be haikus. I think for the most part I'll just be editing this first post to update the poetry in it. Please let me know what you think of my work! I do love to hear from people. And I'm generally pretty friendly... Oh! And I'm always interested in reading new things, so please, if you have reccomendations, let me know! And I'd be glad to read your work too, if you'd like. So... Adieu, say Adieu, It's time to say goodbye, friend For this is the end. Our Story Let's write a story, You and me And show the world What we can be. Take my hand, We've things to do Lets show the world That love is true. |
I like the first one x3 I love how each line flows into the next, and how it sounds as a whole.
The second one is really good too =o |
Thank you! :boogie:
The first one I like a lot... But I like most of the haikus I write. The second one I sort of wrote on a whim... But I kind of like the rough feel of it, not so.. refined. Thanks for reading :) |
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