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xRhii 10-02-2010 09:14 PM

Just a poem I wrote a while back...
 
Uhm..well I wrote this a while back while feeling some strong emotions. It was somewhat inspired by the the song 'Zydrate Anatomy' from Repo! The Genetic Opera. No I don't really cut or anything like that but these lines just started flowing in my head and I had to write them down. So Mene what do you think? Opinions?

One simple cut,
It can't do much..
Just one slice;
One slice, like the roll of the dice.
A touch above the vein,
Lets play this deadly game.
Blood flows freely.
Oh no, have I cut to deeply?
Watch as the pain shoots through.
I told you I could do this too.
You played your cards,
Can't you see the scars?
This wound is but a material release
Red stains of blood soon increase.
Could this be the day I lose my life?
Stolen silently by the knife.
My last breath given to you I could not save
Now lay me softly in my grave
This is the addiction to the blade...





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