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Critisize or Judge Please?
Well, to be honest, I really don't think I'm that good, but I guess other people think otherwise, I can't scan the pictures on, so I just take pictures. To em they look....off... But I'll let you guys decide on that conclusion....
Here are some samples~ http://th03.deviantart.net/fs70/PRE/...ki-d2zzodm.jpg http://th09.deviantart.net/fs71/PRE/...ki-d2zt725.jpg http://th07.deviantart.net/fs71/PRE/...ki-d2zt137.jpg http://th01.deviantart.net/fs71/PRE/...ki-d2zoba3.jpg http://fc02.deviantart.net/fs71/i/20...ki-d2zob2r.jpg http://fc03.deviantart.net/fs70/f/20...ki-d2zeg84.jpg http://th07.deviantart.net/fs71/PRE/...ki-d2zeeai.jpg Those aren't all the ones I've drawn, but to me, they seem like they need some reviews......tell me what you think, I'm open to drawing anything if you have requests!~ Ah, and the first one, I actually did draw, I just felt like outlining it at that point...[Last sunday :XD] |
Ummm, post now and tell me what you think? ~^^~ I really need some criticism, got anything to say that i can fix? As some of my friends say, I could just be too paranoid about my drawings.....You can decide on that if you want~
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These are really good! I like the way how you make folds, I can't seem to make any cloth folds...
One thing you might want to look at are the feet, I think the position and perspective need a little work. Other than that, great job! :) |
Yup, i have that problem with feet, they always turn out wrong~ Though I'm working on it!~ Thanks though!~
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i think there really good^^ i like them all, the 5th pic made me laugh
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Haha thanks, I kinda failed on the guys, but yeah (^з^)-☆
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The chainsaw was... Too short. Everyone wants deadly chainsaws looong XD I liked the style too. ^-^
Sometimes the proportions were a bit off, but not that it bothers much if at all. |
The proportions do seem to be a little off, especially in the leg area. The arms come down to about the right place on the body, but you cut the legs off too short. The first one looks about correct, with a 5-head height. In the second drawing, the guy looks to be about the right height, but I think his fingers might be a little long. The girl's legs could either be longer or you need to lower her so that she stands on the same level as the guy. Right now, she gives the appearance of just floating uneasily above the ground instead of standing. Personally, I suggest lengthening her legs, because her hips give away that she's not a child and shouldn't have such short legs.
I think you also show, as many young artists tend to do, an inconsistency in flatness. The faces appear flattened, and sometimes a limb, while the rest you've rounded out. You show an interesting sense of design in the third one, which I like. I also really like that you're starting to pay attention to how fabric folds in the second drawing, though it disappears again in some of the others. Overall, I think my favorite figure is the girl in the 5th drawing with her hand in the air. She expresses an emotion and show action and I feel like your drawing style shines through the most with her. Honestly, I think you're restricting yourself a bit with the "manga' approach. I have nothing against manga style, but even amongst that genre are sub-genres of many different styles. Sit down and practice things like eyes and noses, real and cartoon-y over and over again until you find out what suits you best. Also practice drawing real people (even if you look like a total creeper) to get a better sense of how they move, their proportions and how fabric works. Good luck and happy drawing! :D |
Oh!~ it makes sense that way~ I'm still that beginner person, so shading and realism isn't too much of my specialty, neither is propotions, but I think talking something from a small picture and enlarging it to a piece of paper is good for me~~ I should put up some more pictures, but it would be too much of a hassle to leaf through my sketchbook to find something nice~ thanksfor the tip happy!
Diamond-- haha, that's true, but I wanted to stick to a cute girl, though. But! I now need to put a chainsaw in my next picture! xD |
perhaps work a little more on proportions? and face/body shapes. your on the right track, your clothes r very cute, and your people style looks very shojo. all around cute pics ;3
hope i could offer some assistance -^.^- |
Wow you're a great artist ^^ you're really good I like your art.
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Sear--thanks!~ I knew my proportions weren't really the best~meh, I'm working at that!
Mira--haha thank you's! I take some pride in my art xD |
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