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babyy turtle 10-13-2010 04:39 PM

My poems
 
my most recent and current favoriute short:
Some could say I was unique
Never surprised by the weekly Newsweek
I would say I am quite strange
My heart never needed to change
I don't think I am insane
My sanity, I can maintain
I like to color, draw, and play
It would be unsmart, to ever stray
There is never much to say about me
I guess you'll have to stick around and see


others:I see the sun
It is here, in my backyard
It is there, in my bedroom,
There, in my bathroom,
It goes everywhere,
Follows me, like a lie, follows a puppy,
It is always with me,
But never quite within reach,
I feel it hovering,
Like my ancestors, watching me,
I like this strange new feeling,
I hope it never goes away.


I feel as though,
I didn't know,
What was left,
and who was right,
I didn't know what I knew,
All I needed was to find you,
You helped me realize where was left,
and where was right,
You tought me how,
to sleep through the night,
Thank you.

where have all my dreams gone?
Have they fled,
or are they just hiding,
hiding in a place I can't reach,
Can I find them?
I miss them.
Please dreams,
Don't go.


I see the petals,
see them fall slowly from the flower,
It drifts in small circles,
large circles,
saunters down,
down to the ground,
Why is it leaving?
Is it simply fleeing from the nest?
Too old to stay?
Or just running away?

These ones aren't that good. I will for sure be adding more very soon, okay? post your criticism?


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