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Chocolate Cosmos 04-04-2011 12:22 AM

Opinions?
 
Just finished this and I would like some feedback. :3

http://i1226.photobucket.com/albums/...Picture5-3.png

Just a close-up...
http://i1226.photobucket.com/albums/...Picture7-4.png

Amaitae 04-04-2011 04:54 AM

Very nice pose. That's the first thing i'm drawn to. Good anatomy as well. Did you use a reference? It's really really good. Good value as well. I do think that the edges could be cleaned up a little, and I'm not totally sure what she is holding up.... But overall, it's pretty good. Good composition :)

Chocolate Cosmos 04-04-2011 05:11 AM

Thank you for the critique. <3
I was having some trouble in areas... (The messy spots) and it kind of looked funny cleaned up.
She's supposed to be holding a tarot card. I have a screen shot of a close up but I'm on my phone right now...

And I did use a reference from posemaniacs.com :3

Amaitae 04-04-2011 05:50 AM

omg, love that site :D It helps so much. I only wish they had a few more poses, rather than just a few with many different angles

Chocolate Cosmos 04-04-2011 09:50 PM

I know what you mean... But I guess it takes a really long time to get the images made...

WinglessFairy 06-20-2011 11:34 PM

good grief.
That's effing amazing!
TEACH ME YOUR MAGICS O_O

yes, I can't critique that at all...beautiful work =3

Lucadia 06-24-2011 07:07 PM

This is a really amazing piece... Wow o_o. The edges are a little rough but other then that this piece of art is amazing!

Cuddlymoon 09-08-2011 08:32 PM

WOW!!1

Pa-chinko 09-11-2011 08:25 AM

Its gorgeous, love it.
Only complaint I have would be the lips are a little big but beautiful otherwise.

Maroon Surreal 10-13-2011 03:35 PM

WOW.

Akoura 10-26-2011 10:17 AM

Oh, this is quite nice. Though, I think that you should add another shade of lighting to bring out the shape of the body and points such as where the leg over laps the other leg, to define the shape as the colours are similar and merge together. Maybe some added shades/highlights to the face as well to show the curves of her features. I love the eyes though.


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