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Miss_Muffinz13x 07-17-2011 02:13 AM

The Broken Mirror
 
NO HATERZ :) there is a copyright on this btw

The broken glass around my bed
knowing i cant see my reflection
Relief flows through me
Knowing i cant see my ugliness anymore
A smile appears on my face
knowing i can feel normal now
*(dramatic pause)*
Makes me Happy

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this was about how i was feeling one night
so i wrote this poem
(I think rhyming poems are kinda sappy)
please tell me how it is
this was one of my first poems :)

Miss_Muffinz13x 07-17-2011 02:21 AM

the heartbreaker
 
A heart shaped in glass
A smile on your face
This day can't get any better for you
So why am i frowning
you betrayed me
with her
my best friend
my OLD best friend
I burned up the pages
And cried all night
For you
The heartbreaker

COPYRIGHT
No haters please :)

Miss_Muffinz13x 07-17-2011 02:38 AM

Paramore Inspired
 
so this poetry was inspired by Paramore


Century

Why wont you pick up the phone
a hole in my heart youve built
and its growing by the year
month
week
day
hour
second
CENTURY
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copyright
NO HATERS PLEASE:)

Miss_Muffinz13x 07-17-2011 02:41 PM

My poems
 
the world closing around and in
knowing i have made a sin
but comes a time where we fade to blackness
and we dream about things that never happen
where we smile instead of cry
when we sell instead of buy
where we give but not take
but this place is gone
Not for my sake

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this wall of closing darkness
surrounding me with no end
four corners,
four walls,
and a door locked within
choose a key and choose one fast
for this is where your fate really lasts

Miss_Muffinz13x 07-19-2011 12:42 AM

Its been said but never done
cried a river and come undone
made me feel all alone
but in this empty home
there is a spirit i tend to seek
and the river changed into a creek

Miss_Muffinz13x 07-19-2011 02:34 PM

Poem
 
Dark as night
Deadly as a sin
trying to cooperate
is just a hymn

Adel 07-20-2011 04:00 AM

Quote:

this wall of closing darkness
surrounding me with no end
four corners,
four walls,
and a door locked within
choose a key and choose one fast
for this is where your fate really lasts
I really like how this one flows from line to line. It grabbed my attention. The other ones are pretty good too, so I think you should share more poems =)

DaisyKeehl 07-26-2011 03:48 AM

Very Interesting~

Cherry Who? 07-27-2011 10:20 PM

Hi, Miss_Muffinz13x! Each user is only allowed one poetry thread, so I've merged all of your threads together in this one. If you want to post more of your poems, please post them in this thread. :)


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