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Monte Gray 09-23-2011 03:47 PM

The other Jirochi
 
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Name: Kari
Age: 16
Bio: she is an experiment known as #135 she's a jirochi hosting the 11 tailed cat demon. It's a demon of ice and very powerful. She had been treated like a freak all of her life. She is one of many unknown jirochis that are held captive by a man living in Suna.
Personality: shy, sweet

ReaperOfTime 09-23-2011 06:01 PM

Name- Katana Rose Galaxy
Age- 17
[B]Bio-[/B] Katana is a bright young girl, she is stronger and faster than she is smart though. Her abilities revolve around her speed and strength. She is more adaptive withe becoming stronger than anything else. She loves to fight, not train, and can be a bit hyper-active, and is always on the go. The Galaxy sisters had a battle in their village unknown and the second youngest left to go fight so she could return and do her part. However, she has something within her that is her power, she hates her power no matter its uses or good things done with it. And everyone thinks she has a crush on Kiba and Shikamaru since she is always hanging out with them. But her crush, its not who anyone would expect, even if she had been living in the village since she was 14.
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Name- Gaara Of The Sand
Age- 18
Village- Sand
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Monte Gray 09-23-2011 08:34 PM

Kari sneaked out of the large lab where she and the others had been kept since they were babies. She climbed out a window and ran as far as she could. She hated this place. The people here were mean and treated her worse than they would animals. She ran and ran until she saw a group of children. They were playing some game with a ball. Kari never had anyone to play with as a child. The kids that had been in the lab with her were always either to depressed or to sick to play. She was 16 now. A bit to old to play. She saw a little boy that was sitting alone. He had a dark bruise on one eye. It was clear he had been beaten by someone. She came near him and sat down beside him. "Hey. Why are you all alone young one?" she smiled happily at him. He stared at her in horror. "Run." he whispered. "Run for your life..he's going to get you." he looked so afraid. I felt bad for the little tot. A large man suddenly grabbed her and pinned her to a nearby wall. She kicked his shins and screamed. "Get off!" he lifted her shirt until he saw a blue love kanji on her stomach. The man screamed and threw her to the ground running. She looked at him funny. That was an odd reaction she thought. She wondered if he knew what the kanji meant. A man had been raising the children and had told them all the same thing. To love only themselves and that no one else would love them. It had devastated the children and so the kanji formed on a part of their body. Hers was blue on her stomach. She saw a redheaded man and gasped. He had the kanji on his forehead. She decided to follow him.

ReaperOfTime 09-23-2011 09:39 PM

(okay, what did you think of Gaara? I know the usual pics are normally picked but I like to find a bit of better pics sometimes)

Gaara was returning from a mission and had told his sand siblings that he would catch up with them later. Of course they never argued with him and he walked away towards the center of the village. He was watching as his own people treated him a little better than when he was more of a child. Back then, of course things were different, no one would think he would be able to do anything, but now look at him.

(Sorry dunno what much to write and babysitting at the same time)

Monte Gray 09-23-2011 10:02 PM

((yes a sexy picture I'd say. Dont worry about writing a lot :D))
Kari grabbed his arm and stared into his eyes. "Are you one of us? You have the mark." she rubbed his love kanji gently. She pulled off her shirt and stood before him in only her bra. She didn't have good manners, she ha lived in a lab all of her life. She grabbed his hand and placed it on her own kanji. It was cold to the touch. "See. I'm just like you. I am the 11 tailed cat demon who are you."

ReaperOfTime 09-23-2011 10:36 PM

(Lol actually he is now asleep thankfully. I will have to wake him up soon too otherwise he isn't going to sleep for awhile, By the way, I am curious to ask, have you figured out my charrie's crush? If not it should be revealed later one. Omg, I am so sorry. I just realized you were talking to Gaara, wow blonde moment or what lol)

"What are you talking about, let go of me" Gaara spoke in a plain tone, there was no emotion in it nor was there any annoyance that could be heard. Gaara looked down at her stomach seeing the mark "Who are you?" he asked a bit confused at why she had a mark similar to his. Gaara started to think back about his mark and why he had it, a flash back occurred as...

In the last ditch effort to kill Gaara, Yashamaru detonated a number of exploding tags covering his body, asking Gaara to "please die". Using his sand, Gaara survived the blast, and lost the only person he thought had cared for him, while not knowing the true reason. Gaara then used his sand to etch the kanji for love (愛, ai) onto his forehead, indicating his first actual injury.

The short memory ended in a matter of a moment as Gaara realized he was back near the center of the village staring at the girl whom still had stopped him before asking about his mark. He knew he was the one who created his mark, but, how come this girl had a blue one?

Monte Gray 09-24-2011 02:48 AM

She refused to let go of his hand. "Help me please..you have to stop him..you have to stop Yashamaru. He did this to me. I etched this myself with everlasting ice. He's evil. He asked me to "Please Die" he had paper bombs all over him, but I found out it was a clone. He's keeping us all prisoner. He's going to kill me if he finds I escaped." She fell to her knees." Don't let Him kill me. I'm like you." she sounded frantic. A few men walking by them were staring at her like dogs would a steak. She was still just in her bra. A few women looked disgusted she didn't understand what she had done wrong.

((hmm..is your oc's crush Kakashi?))

ReaperOfTime 09-24-2011 03:24 AM

(*sighs* Sadly this time it is not, as much as I would love to put Katana with him, that is her older sister Kita's crush lol. I watched this show when I was 14 going on 15 for the first time and picked out five boys on there that had no one and made a girl for each of them)

Gaara looked down at the girl surprised that she had chosen the name of the one that had watched over him and did exactly the same thing when he was a child. Looking over while staying focused he realized others were staring, glaring at the men and disapprovingly looking at the women he bent down. He took her shirt in her hands and helped her put it back on "Come on, I think my sister can help" Gaara spoke not thinking about his brother, he thought maybe she should try talking to another female for some reason. "Do you want to walk or should I carry you?" Normally Gaara wasn't that nice but late in this night, he felt as if he needed to protect this girl.

Monte Gray 09-24-2011 03:34 AM

She grabbed Gaara's hand tightly, clearly frightened. "I can walk..thanks anyway." she wanted more than anything to just fall and let him carry her. Her legs were shaky from fear. She knew what would happen if she was found.
"S-so..what's your name?" she was trying to start a conversation to get the thought of being burned to death out of her mind. She couldnt help but wonder why he wanted her to talk to his sister.


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She grabbed Gaara's hand tightly, clearly frightened. "I can walk..thanks anyway." she wanted more than anything to just fall and let him carry her. Her legs were shaky from fear. She knew what would happen if she was found.
"S-so..what's your name?" she was trying to start a conversation to get the thought of being burned to death out of her mind. She couldnt help but wonder why he wanted her to talk to his sister.

ReaperOfTime 09-24-2011 03:57 AM

(Uh you doubled lol. Why did you guess Kakashi at first? I am curious now lol)

"Isn't it a bit rude to ask for another's name before giving your own?"
Though Gaara didn't wait "Gaara" was all he said after that reply, he would surely need to talk to his siblings about this, or maybe he shouldn't. Now that there was someone else out there like him, he wondered how many were out there exactly.

Monte Gray 09-24-2011 11:12 AM

"My name is #135..or Kari. Most just call me by my number though." she suddenly stoped dead in her tracks and looked terrified. She heard foot steps and smelled the familiar smell of blood and chemicals. She let go of Gaara's hand and took of running as fast as she could. Yashamaru suddenly stepped in front of her and she threw shards of ice at him. They were like litte daggers, sharp and able to go straight through a person. Yashamaru dodged and laughed. He threw a Kunui, but it hit and ice shield. Suddenly he was behind her and snapped a bracket on her arm. It made her useless and completely unable to use chakra or even have the ice shield. She screamed and tried to struggle from the death grip she was in. "GAARA!" she screamed for him to help her. Tears streamed down her face as Yashamaru pulled out a large curved blade to end her for running away from him. He froze at the name. "You call for Gaara!? I thought I killed that punk years ago!" he turned around to see flaming red hair in the distance.

ReaperOfTime 09-24-2011 04:22 PM

(haha lol you posted the answer to the other thread about who my charry on here will like lol)

"Yashamaru" Gaara's voice wasn't surprised or shocked, it was filled with more hatred than anything else. "Get away from her" Gaara was getting protective as he remembered how Yashamaru tried to kill him back then, he also remembered the night he died, and now it made him wonder why he wasn't dead. Gaara wasn't about to watch and sit in the back while Yashamaru was going to do something to another like him.

Monte Gray 09-24-2011 07:19 PM

Yashamuru laughed at Gaara. "idiot! You should have died like I asked you to so long a go. Now I'm gonna get you and it's going to be very unpleasant." his attention was so much on Gaara that he nearly forgot the girl in his grip. In the instant he forgot Kari she grabbed his Kunui and stabbed him with it in the hand. He screamed and dropped her. He was clutching his wounded hand and cursing loudly. Kari ran to Gaara and hid behind him.

ReaperOfTime 09-24-2011 07:35 PM

"Kari, whatever you do, don't leave my site" Gaara spoke still not taking his eyes away from Yashamaru "You tried killing me back then, you even tried to have me kill myself. Why are you doing all of this Yashamaru, why not just forget about kids like us? Why go through so much just to lie to us" Gaara was starting to feel all the pressure around him build up, all those years were starting to show how much pain he was going through, but, his voice stayed pretty much the same.

Monte Gray 09-24-2011 07:54 PM

Kari clung to Gaara like her life depended on it. She hadn't planed on leaving him as it was. "Y-Yes Gaara..I'll stay by you." she stuttered. Yashamaru looked at Gaara with hate. "You horrible children need to die. You're freaks. You kill and destroy. No one loves you monsters. You're spawn of satan all of you!" he looked angry. Kari busted out crying. Being called all those horrid things always hurt her so bad. She could feel Gaara's hurt rising also. She hung around his waist like a child. She dried the tears and spoke. "We love each other. If no one else does then we can love each other. We don't need you human scum!" she practically screamed at him and he laughed so hard he had tears in his eyes. "O really? You think this man can love you!?" he pointed to Gaara. "He only loves himself. He will kill you the instant you become boring to him." Kari looked at Gaara and saw he really was a good person. "No he won't! He'd never kill me. He's a better man then you could ever hope to be." she spit at him and hissed. Her eyes were like a cats. She could control her demon completely and was ready to rip Yashamaru to shreads. The bracelet was gone and she had use of her chakra and the demons.

ReaperOfTime 09-24-2011 08:00 PM

Gaara closed his eyes, all of this arguing over love was pissing him off. Normally he could stay calm and collected but right now nothing mattered to him. "Don't move Kari" he whispered as the sand around them came to life moving about, a shield around Gaara and Kari appeared so they couldn't attacked from anywhere but the front. "You think I was a monster back then? You have no idea how much of one I can be now Yashamaru" Gaara spoke, his tone changing slightly as the sand rose up and quickly shot out at Yashamaru attacking him. The noise caused others to look out of their windows, however, no one really came out to help. Not with Gaara there that is.

Monte Gray 09-24-2011 08:37 PM

Yashamaru dogged the sand and hurled shruken at the opening in the sand. Kari put up a barrier of ice and the shrunken fell to the ground as they hit the barrier. Yashamaru growled. He wanted them to just die already. He tried to attack, but he was no match for the sand and the ice. Kari threw a shard of ice that caught him in the stomach. He was still alive and came for them agian.

ReaperOfTime 09-24-2011 08:51 PM

Gaara gathered the sand around Yashamaru, he didn't have any feelings for the man to live, "Sand Coffin" Gaara stated as the sand instantly gathered and clung to Yashamaru crushing him instantly. Gaara's eyes were focused on the event happening before them but his free hand was around Kari making sure that nothing or no one would touch her.

(I left it open without the blood part just in case)

Monte Gray 09-24-2011 09:02 PM

Kari stared at the horror before her. It was terrifing like a horror movie only she new it was real. She want afraid of Gaara, but she didn't like blood. "T-Thank you." she managed to choke out. She wanted to go somewhere safer. "G-Gaara? Can we leave now? I don't like it here. She stared at the mangled mess that had been Yashamaru. He had deserved his horrible death.
((blood Is fine :D))

ReaperOfTime 09-24-2011 09:05 PM

(No I mean, I didn't know if you want him to die yet or not)

Gaara's sand fell "Lets walk" Gaara spoke, his face blank, after all that had happened, he wasn't totally sure on how to act. He wasn't sure how to express anything and would have to try and deal with this later. Did the village even know that Yashamaru was alive? The village had been so kind to him over the years, not alot, but, enough to keep himself here.

Monte Gray 09-24-2011 09:42 PM

((yes he needs to die cause I hate him. I still don't know the crush of your charactor. You should tell me :D))

Kari gently kissed his cheek as a thank you for saving her from Yashamaru. She knew they'd have to fight off his heanchmen eventually as well. They'd be mad that they'd killed him. She walked wit him in silence, not knowing what to say to him.

ReaperOfTime 09-24-2011 09:51 PM

(Do you want to know? Really? I love knowing something like this without anyone else knowing it lol so much fun. Kakashi is my top favorite, but, because of how is sometimes and how I like something a bit different. I chose to like...*train goes by*... and well thats the crush XD)

After awhile they arrived at his house and he called throughout it "TEMARI, KANKURO" "Don't worry they are nice" Gaara replied as he opened the door and waited "Gaara, whats wrong?" Kankuro asked as Temari added not so trusting "Who is she?" "My friend; Temari could you help her out with cleaning up" Gaara spoke and Temari was hesitant "Uh yea, sure, whats your name?" Temari asked. Kankuro and Gaara walked off to talk about what just had happened, their sensei would also want to know about this.

Monte Gray 09-24-2011 09:58 PM

"Kari.." she awnsered so quietly it could have been consIdered a whisper "Where did Gaara go?" it was clear she was afraid of Temari. She wanted Gaara to come back and hold her. She wanted him to tell her she was going to be alright. She shivered as she thought. She really was terrified of this new stranger. The only women she'd ever been around had beat her and called her names. She was afraid Temari might do the same.

ReaperOfTime 09-24-2011 10:05 PM

"I dont know, probably the rooftops to talk to Gaara or Gaara's room. Come on let's get you cleaned up and in some newer clothes" Temari smiled being nice to her. Gaara having a friend within these walls were unheard of. "Whats wrong Kari?" Temari asked concerned, her face showed she was concerned. "I'm not going to hurt you, none of us will. I'm his sister, I wouldn't do anything to his friends"

Monte Gray 09-24-2011 10:25 PM

She now trusted Temari. She had a point. If she was Gaara's sister, she wouldn't hurt her. Besides, Gaara said she was nice. She figured she'd better tell Temari her secret. "I'm a jirochi..that's why I'm Gaara's friend. He saved me from Yashamaru. I lived in a lab for almost all of my life. The women would beat me up and stuff. They said it would make me tougher. They had these braclets that make us weak and defenseless. They did horrible test on us." she smiled sadly.


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