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Furious 09-24-2011 04:07 AM

Would you please rate this Dream Avatar and give suggestions?
 
Hi all!

I was fooling around with the DAC, and a sudden theme came to mind... And I built an avatar around the theme. It's a very random theme, but I'm a very random person. Also please ignore the hair and eyes, as I didn't feel like changing them just to mess with the DAC. Though feel free to give hair suggestions and eye ideas anyway, just because I'm not entirely sure what would match anyway.

Okay the theme is: A Maestro, on the night of a big performance (hence the reason he's so dressed up) finally snapped. After years of being fed up with students who didn't focus, and weren't as dedicated as he wanted, he finally just lost it. Especially since during rehearsal that night, they were even more distracted than normal, the selfish brats! It was his big night, and they were going to screw it up!
Well, the rest is self explanatory.

http://i56.tinypic.com/16915hk.png

He is now on the run, and still awaiting his big night.

Suggestions and critique are definitely encouraged. I feel as if it could have more to it. Something to give it a little extra spice. But I'm just not sure what. I feel like it's pretty lacking around the bottom, mostly. Heeelp? <:

EDIT: Here's an updated version, in case anyone happens to be too lazy to scroll down the page to see my update!

http://i53.tinypic.com/2cfbigz.png

Edited To Add: Here's an updated

Bearzy 09-24-2011 09:52 AM

That is a very cool avatar. I love the theme, and the colours. The only thing I can think of is perhaps a background and perhaps hairstyle number 29? I don't know if that's available for male avatars though.

Furious 09-24-2011 02:52 PM

Thanks, I'm really glad you like it! 8D I had a lot of fun making it. I think a background might help as well, but I'm not sure what. I've never used a background... *goes to check* I was also thinking maybe a pool of blood. But I'm really not sure what item the bloodstains and pool of blood are from! D: I checked all the shops and the marketplace, but I just can't find it anywhere.

Maria-Minamino 09-24-2011 02:55 PM

The pool of blood is from the Tome of Nightmares an older CI and the bloody floor is from Fright Night just like the blood stains you have on you already.

Anyway - I really like this avvie! Getting that color blue from the cape to work is hard!

Furious 09-24-2011 03:07 PM

Thank you, Maria-Minamino!

And I'm really glad I managed to match the cape then :O It was pure chance that I picked it.

Also, I updated it with background, is it better than before?

http://i53.tinypic.com/2cfbigz.png

Bearzy 09-25-2011 10:40 PM

The background works. I was worried it might be too much, but it does work. Good job.


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