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Alessa's Art :D
I will post finished works here for critique! Please give me some constructive criticism. I'm working on improving my artwork so that I can pursue it seriously. ^^
The first piece I am posting is: http://i1220.photobucket.com/albums/...okfoward-2.jpg |
That actually looks pretty good[:
I think it might help if you add her jaw line though, it looks like her neck is a part of her face xD. I also feel like the eye is misplaced or something, but I'm not good at people so I shouldn't really be talking though. Keep drawing! I'd love to see more[:. |
I agree, her eye should be a bit further up on the face and closer. Make the chin a bit more prominent and SHADE the skin...maybe with a reddish orange hue.
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Interesting o3o I like the eyes
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that good i suck at drawing side face
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I has posts here...I completely forgot about this thread. Erinmc: Hmm...yeah I tried experimenting with that a little...it was a little frustrating to make it look right. Cuddlymoon: I can see the eye is off, I'll keep that in mind when I try to draw something like this again. And I haven't done a lot of digital drawing so that's why there isn't shading. ^^; I have to get better at it :d kittynekohime: Thank you! :3 jabble: Thanks...and yeah, this took references, erasing, and redrawing. ^^; |
your welcome ^^
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Good job!
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The neck looks a little funny but honestly the eyes look fine to me. Lots of people have lots of different heights and different properties about their facial features.
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