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I'm writing a story
I'm writing a story called "Chaos". You can read it here Testrific - Stories - Chaos by 634Shadow634 constructive criticism is allowed. I'm still working on it, but it would be helpful if you all pointed out things I may have missed. For example... not describing a character enough. or too much description on other things, and not the main character...
Anyway.. please read it, and tell me what you think. |
Hi Shadow4121:
:D Since you're looking for feedback on a story you've written, I'm going to move this over to Lit Spot in the Writing Discussion/Story help subforum so you can get more helpful feedback. The Books forum is more to discuss books, not your own writing. :yes: Please feel free to PM me if you have any questions. :D |
I've got a couple things I'd like to point out, some suggestions, others what I think is a mistake. But than, my grammar isn't perfect, it just seems slightly off to me.
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