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Been Practising
I need critiques on how to improve anatomy and coloring. This is a Gijinka for Cotton Candy for a contest on DeviantArt.
http://fc03.deviantart.net/fs70/f/20...on-d4vlx2j.png Also I'd love it if someone could red-line for me. Thanks! |
Oh my god, that is absolutely adorable. Her hair looks like cotton candy :3
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Cuddly~ :O You're on Mene too? <3
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great i love the color<3
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Here, I red-lined your drawing.
Click here! It was a bit hard to red-line since, well, it's a chibi and also it's drawn in a stylistic manner where everything is supposed to be distorted, or miniature. I also didn't know if you wanted just for the body/position or face. Anime is a bit hard for me to critique. So I made a character sheet, and I know what I drew doesn't line up, but I wanted to show you how the anatomy is built in an easy way. The joint is like a ball, (like a ball-joint doll) and when an arm, or a leg is coming foward, it overlaps the joint. In your drawing, it was a bit hard to see that, making the elbows a bit wonky looking. I drew to show you how the foot would look hanging like on the girl. The hands are difficult because, since they're crossed, it shows a lot of fingers. I'd suggest, just drawing a gesture of it, so it shows the gist of the movement of the hands, but not drawing all 10 fingers. I hope this helps. I can always help red line anything else. |
I suck at drawing so I can't do much for you but she's so cute I can hardly stand it!
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