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Critique?
Toksyn from my Experiment series. I rarely have anyone give commentary on my work and sometimes it helps the creative process and whatnot. So, have at thee!!!!
Toksyn by ~AModernTaleOfFaerie on deviantART I'm paranoid about my stuff getting ripped off, hence the link rather than an actual posting of the picture. |
(I swear I'm not stalking you! Hahah.. T_T;;)
Your coloring is amazing!! Well, your lines are, too. His arm and torso are quite thin..? I do like his expression though. Lots of emotion. :) What's his back story? |
Haha thanks! Yeah, he's a tad emaciated XD
As far as backstory he's the elder brother of Bio (one of my other boys) and they're made of toxic chemicals much like everyone who lives in their world. Their world also happens to be in the center of ours. I dunno, I haven't really come up with anything specific other than Toksyns like the medic for both the evil experiments (I call them that because I got nothing else :P) and the not-so-evil experiments. In total there are the Nobel Gasses comprised of the founding elements which retain high standing within the world, then there are Toksyn, Siknus, Dis-ease, Bio, Seth and The Cure. Siknus and The Cure consider themselves the intermediaries between the Nobles and the Experiments. Ugh, it's all just a big mental mess haha. I had a role play loosely based around the story on gaia. Hmmm..... I might have to try that out on here. |
Sounds interesting. :) Hah maybe you should, it may turn out well. :)
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I think I'll give it a go. I just put an RP up so I'm waiting to see how that goes first.
Ah, just looking at Toksyn makes me want to draw him some more. His hair is so pretty [drool] |
Good luck! :)
YES, IT IS!! I was admiring it for quite a while. ^^; What do you use to color? |
Pen. I was so sad when my favorite blue pen ran out of ink [cry]
That's a relatively older pic from when I only used ink. I've been using marker and a little colored pencil these days. I had to cave when I couldn't find a brown pen haha |
Oh, wow... I can't imagine being able to draw with pens... I make way too many mistakes, haha.
Ahh.. Either way, I think your traditional works are very eye-catching. :) Good luck finding a brown pen? There's got to be one online somewhere... :) |
I actually found one!! Inkjoy has a brown pen in one of their packs XD Just bought it yesterday haha
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Wow...I wish I could be this great with art.
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