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Love
Love is like a rough gem
Unpolished and beautiful at first Hidden within a hard shell When time sets in We learn more and more about the other Some love starts happy but ends in pain And some love doesn’t change at all Still just as much in love as the day it all started Love can be amazing It can be sad But a true love is what we should cherish Until the day we die |
Good one hun, post more
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thank you hunni
i been writing more in dutch lately |
Quite good ^^
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and the rest?
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It's good, though it feels like a different poem a little bit. After those 3 lines the mention of the gem disappears suddenly.
(Tried to word it nicely, as it is still a good poem) |
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Well for guessing that's a pretty impressive guess :)
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thank you
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