Scribbles and doodles
 

I figured I'd ask for some crit, because I never get any and if I'm the only one judging my art, I might overlook something I could work on.
I'm not perfect but I'm trying my best!

I'll be posting sketches mostly.
I'm working on a collab, and I'm doing the linework part.
But I'll only show the sketch though.

hey there. I rather like the eyes. They have a realistic, but still stylized look and the highlights really pull the image together.

for the first sketch, looks like the hair cuts in too close to the head. The forehead is a bit high and usually the hair is drawn poofing out more.

I hope this helps?

It does help!
I see it now too.
Thanks [eager]

Ophium:

Here you go Opi-chan! I finally got around to it, hope you find these helpful.

SKETCH


ELF


EYES


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I recommend clicking the picture to full size so you can read and see everything.

it does help, thanks!
the elf pic was one of my first tries with a drawing pad.
by the time I drew the eyes I already learned that with the eyelashes [lol]
Thanks :3
but the ear thing, I'll keep that in mind.

No problem, anytime :D

I really like the elf. the hair is lovely =3