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I totally like the fact that mom is calmer than dad, so hilariously cute! <33
To be honest, I am not a fan of anthro characters. x.x |
Heh, thank you.
Eh, oh well. It's how these characters are :/ |
Nothing wrong with anthro, just that I am not the correct audience. x.x
I don't think I can give a fair comment since I would be too bias. It is a heartwarming story... however, I can't seem to find the plot points... that modern story was just the beginning? right? If the story focus on healing, the above history of parents and 5-7 years should be like the first quarter of the story? If so, I think the history may best work in a flashback ways. |
Yes, it's just the beginning. Kind of.
I don't really see it as a story so much though.. So there might not be a beginning, middle, and an end.. |
Planning on expand on that story?
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Hmm, maybe
I don't know Wait, which one? |
the modern one.
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Yeah, there is more, but I'm kind of stuck on how to word it all
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I am currently stuck in one of my scene too, not entirely sure how the detail is going to carry out. x.x
But I know the effect/conclusion I want, so maybe I would write the effect first, then go back to write how it happened. |
Perhaps I should do that..
It would certainly help |
and by now you should also realize that, this subforum is not all that popular.
I would suggest you to go to more established writer's forum if you are serious about writing. When I say serious, it doesn't necessary means professional, I take my writing hobby seriously too. <3 NaNo is a good place to roam. Even though I am not a member, the forum is open to all, I like reading on people's query and sometimes you stumbled upon similar problem and could find the solution there. I especially love that NaNo's forum is very organized. |
I know it's not all that popular
But, I'm not really all that serious about writing, I never really thought about making these things into story like things I was just developing backgrounds for some of my characters to kind of explain why they are how they are now and I don't know how else to really do that.. |
hmm... What motivates you to create your characters?
Just curious. |
The way I'm feeling at the time has a lot to do with it. But, they are kind of an extention of me.
I don't really think I have motivation for them, they just swim or hop or skitter through my head.. |
I see...
and ultimately, you do not know what to do with the characters and story? how about what you WANT them to be come? a much fuller story? a more establish character? get OC art? |
Well, it's hard to say..
I'd like oc art but with Io I don't know some of her markings And I don't have the money for artwork from others And I can't make it because I need a new tablet stylus |
That is where virtual currency comes in.
Site like these have artist who are willing to produce art for virtual coins. |
Yes, but most of the artist I would like art from aren't on this site..
Nothing against the artist here.. |
I see. Okay.
Best wishes on your creations. <3 |
Thank you.
---------- Post added 10-05-2014 at 12:15 AM ---------- Oh! I know what I can do with Fish's "story".. Like you said about the flash back thing.. I got to thinking about it And that's probably what I'll do.. :3 |
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Oops copied all of that hah
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